for Teen Titans: The Symbiotic Heroine8/27/2017 c8 
1SPeCTeR-ll7
Wow, ballsy move offing the joker so soon. Props to the two of you! I am somewhat disappointed with what happened to ace in this chapter. If I remember correctly, it was an aneurism that ended up killing ace in the show, which is something toxin should have been able to cure. Regardless, this is a great chapter and story, and I can't wait for the next update.
1SPeCTeR-ll7Wow, ballsy move offing the joker so soon. Props to the two of you! I am somewhat disappointed with what happened to ace in this chapter. If I remember correctly, it was an aneurism that ended up killing ace in the show, which is something toxin should have been able to cure. Regardless, this is a great chapter and story, and I can't wait for the next update.
8/24/2017 c8 9Cadet-Jinx
Good chapter you guys, I liked that you didn't kill Jason in the story while still alluding the fact that he may ( and does in the actual comics) become Red Hood. Anyhow, keep up the good work!
9Cadet-JinxGood chapter you guys, I liked that you didn't kill Jason in the story while still alluding the fact that he may ( and does in the actual comics) become Red Hood. Anyhow, keep up the good work!
8/22/2017 c8 Guest
Mae Whitman because it seems to suit her
Mae Whitman because it seems to suit her
8/7/2017 c7 19JTD3
I wasn't really interested at first, but after seeing the cover art, I decided to give it a shot.
19JTD3I wasn't really interested at first, but after seeing the cover art, I decided to give it a shot.
7/29/2017 c7 xbox432
Hmm, overall look on the story? I'm loving the interactions between Toxin and Scarlet, actually getting to see them communicate with each other really brings a point home that out of all the Symbiotes, Toxin is the only one living in a symbiotic relationship with his host. That is, that the two of them actively help and support one another rather than fusing to the point there is no longer a distinction in their personalities.
And I'm enjoying the slow introduction of any shipping. In stories where both characters are known, the author can "skimp out" on the details due to the audience being able to provide the info with their imagination (still a cop out though). But in the case of OCs you really do need time to set up their personalities and get the readers invested. I can kinda see a twisted shipping with Fang's interest in Scarlet... but that's more along the lines of me imagining him attacking and "claiming her" like Adonis did to Raven in canon. Much creepy.
And I suspect you're either setting the groundwork for having Scarlet get together with Starfire, or it could just be the basis for besties. But so far Star seems to be the only Titan Scarlet is getting along with on a personal level. I'd actually support it as I think Star's positivity would be could for Scarlet. And that's saying something as I'm actually more of a Raven fanboy.
For the chapter, good fight scenes with the Royal Flush gang. Not exactly in-depth, but you gave us enough for our imaginations to work with. I'll be looking forward to seeing how They handle getting set on fire, I'm guessing it'll be traumatic for both of them. Also, wow. Red Robin is kind of a dick... which is ironic considering Robin #1's name. :P
I'm VERY curious to see what'll happen to the Royal Flush gang after this whole escapade. All thrown back in jail where they can be easily routed back to Cadmus? Personally I'm hoping they can at least offer Ace an option to take... the episode where she passed away was seriously sad. It'd be nice if she got a chance to be at least a little happy.
Hmm, overall look on the story? I'm loving the interactions between Toxin and Scarlet, actually getting to see them communicate with each other really brings a point home that out of all the Symbiotes, Toxin is the only one living in a symbiotic relationship with his host. That is, that the two of them actively help and support one another rather than fusing to the point there is no longer a distinction in their personalities.
And I'm enjoying the slow introduction of any shipping. In stories where both characters are known, the author can "skimp out" on the details due to the audience being able to provide the info with their imagination (still a cop out though). But in the case of OCs you really do need time to set up their personalities and get the readers invested. I can kinda see a twisted shipping with Fang's interest in Scarlet... but that's more along the lines of me imagining him attacking and "claiming her" like Adonis did to Raven in canon. Much creepy.
And I suspect you're either setting the groundwork for having Scarlet get together with Starfire, or it could just be the basis for besties. But so far Star seems to be the only Titan Scarlet is getting along with on a personal level. I'd actually support it as I think Star's positivity would be could for Scarlet. And that's saying something as I'm actually more of a Raven fanboy.
For the chapter, good fight scenes with the Royal Flush gang. Not exactly in-depth, but you gave us enough for our imaginations to work with. I'll be looking forward to seeing how They handle getting set on fire, I'm guessing it'll be traumatic for both of them. Also, wow. Red Robin is kind of a dick... which is ironic considering Robin #1's name. :P
I'm VERY curious to see what'll happen to the Royal Flush gang after this whole escapade. All thrown back in jail where they can be easily routed back to Cadmus? Personally I'm hoping they can at least offer Ace an option to take... the episode where she passed away was seriously sad. It'd be nice if she got a chance to be at least a little happy.
7/29/2017 c5 xbox432
Aww, adorable. No one can resit Star's puppy eyes attack! It is nice to see Scarlet finally spending some time with a team mate, maybe they'll become closer as friends eh?
Aww, adorable. No one can resit Star's puppy eyes attack! It is nice to see Scarlet finally spending some time with a team mate, maybe they'll become closer as friends eh?
7/29/2017 c4 xbox432
I always wonder why in canon none of the Titans followed Terra to try and talk to her. So I was glad to see Scarlet do that here, even if Terra still decided not to come back.
I always wonder why in canon none of the Titans followed Terra to try and talk to her. So I was glad to see Scarlet do that here, even if Terra still decided not to come back.
7/29/2017 c2 xbox432
Oooh, fun chapter. Got to see Toxin and Scarlet smack Cletus around, and I'm just waiting for the day they start quipping at him and Venom about "slipping a disk" or "breaking a hip".
Only thing I didn't quite like/understand was the little dimensional pocket thing Toxin can apparently do... but hey, it's fanfiction. Artistic License is kinda big on this site so I won't really worry about it.
I'm looking forward to seeing how They (I think plural is really the only way to talk about a Symbiote and its host right?) get along with the Titans, and how They'll build their friendships.
Oooh, fun chapter. Got to see Toxin and Scarlet smack Cletus around, and I'm just waiting for the day they start quipping at him and Venom about "slipping a disk" or "breaking a hip".
Only thing I didn't quite like/understand was the little dimensional pocket thing Toxin can apparently do... but hey, it's fanfiction. Artistic License is kinda big on this site so I won't really worry about it.
I'm looking forward to seeing how They (I think plural is really the only way to talk about a Symbiote and its host right?) get along with the Titans, and how They'll build their friendships.
7/28/2017 c1 xbox432
Well that's an interesting way to meet your new partner... At least Scarlet isn't a raging sociopath, so now Toxin has a chance at being at least simi-well adjusted.
Well that's an interesting way to meet your new partner... At least Scarlet isn't a raging sociopath, so now Toxin has a chance at being at least simi-well adjusted.
7/23/2017 c2 elemental
if Slade and the symbiote could bond and they have a battle it would be so cool
if Slade and the symbiote could bond and they have a battle it would be so cool
7/7/2017 c7 9Cadet-Jinx
Glad to see you got our comment, any how thanks for mentioning us and thanks for the red vs blue reference, (Grif and Simmons) we loved it, I was thinking, should you possibly have Scarlet need Raven to enter her mind to wake her up so Raven can have an in depth look at Scarlet's brain and more importantly Toxin's brain.
9Cadet-JinxGlad to see you got our comment, any how thanks for mentioning us and thanks for the red vs blue reference, (Grif and Simmons) we loved it, I was thinking, should you possibly have Scarlet need Raven to enter her mind to wake her up so Raven can have an in depth look at Scarlet's brain and more importantly Toxin's brain.
7/2/2017 c7 4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Great chapter! Holy spittle! Was not expecting THIS! *Says in Admiral Ackbar voice* IT'S A TRAP!
Anyway, all joking aside (lol get it?), keep this up! I definitely hope to see more! Looks like next chapter, Scarlet will be all on her own! Dun dun dunnn!
Although that thing with the fire that Toxin was in...will it have any unfortunate side affects seeing as he's still an infant (in a way) and all? After all, with a symbiote, you can never tell.
Till next time!
4Antex-The Legendary ZoroarkGreat chapter! Holy spittle! Was not expecting THIS! *Says in Admiral Ackbar voice* IT'S A TRAP!
Anyway, all joking aside (lol get it?), keep this up! I definitely hope to see more! Looks like next chapter, Scarlet will be all on her own! Dun dun dunnn!
Although that thing with the fire that Toxin was in...will it have any unfortunate side affects seeing as he's still an infant (in a way) and all? After all, with a symbiote, you can never tell.
Till next time!
7/1/2017 c7 Slycutter
Ok it's an ok chapter my complaint is the constant pov jumps and scene changes without a divider or line break or something Constant jumps make it really hard to follow the flow of conversation and story because you could be reading about what Robin a saying in one paragraph and the following paragraph Will have the secret organization talking and it just makes it confusing
Ok it's an ok chapter my complaint is the constant pov jumps and scene changes without a divider or line break or something Constant jumps make it really hard to follow the flow of conversation and story because you could be reading about what Robin a saying in one paragraph and the following paragraph Will have the secret organization talking and it just makes it confusing
6/10/2017 c6 9Cadet-Jinx
Hi, I was thinking that you guys should hook Scarlet (Toxin) up with Raven, it would seem to follow some of the thing that Toxin said to Scarlet when they were considering joining the teen titans.
9Cadet-JinxHi, I was thinking that you guys should hook Scarlet (Toxin) up with Raven, it would seem to follow some of the thing that Toxin said to Scarlet when they were considering joining the teen titans.