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11/7/2016 c2 Gal
Please continue this story!
4/30/2016 c2 4Zaralann
Nice!
4/22/2016 c1 Im a guest
btch this no dream xD
4/13/2016 c1 7Paxloria
...Yeah, you might want to think about re-working this chapter a little.

"Yuki" is not "Asuna Yuki" (and deffinately not Kirito) so readers have no idea who she is, what she can do, or what she even looks like and think she is an OC. Since its like that, you should have spent more time describing her, her background, appearence, powers, STATS as both an SAO Player and Servant Archer. It'd be good to know if she has her gamer powers her like Map and Item Box.

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