for The Boyfriend School10/12/2019 c1 derektomlinson
videl saying to gohan i am glad that you broke chichi s first rule
videl saying to gohan i am glad that you broke chichi s first rule
10/8/2019 c1 derektomlinson
videl saying to gohan now that i am your girlfriend here are some rules to follow one i will hurt you if i ever see my boyfriend letting angela flirt with you two lose the baggy clothes and three learn how to dance those dance moves are stupid
videl saying to gohan now that i am your girlfriend here are some rules to follow one i will hurt you if i ever see my boyfriend letting angela flirt with you two lose the baggy clothes and three learn how to dance those dance moves are stupid
9/7/2019 c1 derektomlinson
videl saying to gohan I am glad that you didn't listen to chichi s rules especially the last one
videl saying to gohan I am glad that you didn't listen to chichi s rules especially the last one
4/30/2019 c1 Derek
Videl to gohan wow now that we are bf and gf I know that chichi will not stop till pan is born and now maybe the muscle bound idiot that kept trying to date me and erasa will back off
Videl to gohan wow now that we are bf and gf I know that chichi will not stop till pan is born and now maybe the muscle bound idiot that kept trying to date me and erasa will back off
10/22/2018 c1 
14FictionTheories
Amazing. Just amazing. It’s a really well written story! Loved it. Also, I love Cloak sky! I’ve read a bunch of their stories. I actually found this story in their favorites and that’s why I read this story.
14FictionTheoriesAmazing. Just amazing. It’s a really well written story! Loved it. Also, I love Cloak sky! I’ve read a bunch of their stories. I actually found this story in their favorites and that’s why I read this story.
4/23/2018 c1 natsubeatsrock
This was a really cute story. I could imagine this kind of thing happening, though I'm not sure if Gohan would go for the kiss at the end. Keep up the good work.
This was a really cute story. I could imagine this kind of thing happening, though I'm not sure if Gohan would go for the kiss at the end. Keep up the good work.
1/7/2018 c1 10Loeka
Aww, this was so cute! Loved the way Gohan asked her out, because he totally would do it via note in class x3 And he was so adorably nervous. The rules Chi-chi gave him were hilarious as well, and hearing how he failed to follow them even more so.
This was great!
10LoekaAww, this was so cute! Loved the way Gohan asked her out, because he totally would do it via note in class x3 And he was so adorably nervous. The rules Chi-chi gave him were hilarious as well, and hearing how he failed to follow them even more so.
This was great!
4/20/2016 c1 Guest
This is really cute!
This is really cute!
4/13/2016 c1 9TheGodfather93
I was recommended this fic by CloakSky, and since I'm familiar with some of your previous work, I figured I'd give it a read. I haven't read any DBZ fics lately, as I was too focused on writing my own, but if there ever was a fic to get me back into the spirit of reading, I'm glad it was this one. It was a great example of why I love this pairing so much. There were so many cute moments in this fic, and you managed to keep Videl and Gohan perfectly in character. My favourite scene when Gohan was looking at his watch, only to realise that it couldn't tell the time. Made me chuckle. If there's one thing I would've liked to see though, it would've been a brief description of what Gohan and Videl were wearing for the date, as I'm a sucker for that kind of detail. Nevertheless, you did an awesome job with this fic. I know you're in "DBZ retirement", as you put it, but I do hope you return to write for the series some day.
9TheGodfather93I was recommended this fic by CloakSky, and since I'm familiar with some of your previous work, I figured I'd give it a read. I haven't read any DBZ fics lately, as I was too focused on writing my own, but if there ever was a fic to get me back into the spirit of reading, I'm glad it was this one. It was a great example of why I love this pairing so much. There were so many cute moments in this fic, and you managed to keep Videl and Gohan perfectly in character. My favourite scene when Gohan was looking at his watch, only to realise that it couldn't tell the time. Made me chuckle. If there's one thing I would've liked to see though, it would've been a brief description of what Gohan and Videl were wearing for the date, as I'm a sucker for that kind of detail. Nevertheless, you did an awesome job with this fic. I know you're in "DBZ retirement", as you put it, but I do hope you return to write for the series some day.
4/6/2016 c1 55the eye of the panda
Thank youuuuu! :D
I read it again, and it's just so cute ahhhh... *heart*
55the eye of the pandaThank youuuuu! :D
I read it again, and it's just so cute ahhhh... *heart*