for Desired2/27/2021 c7 fabrayctrl
I’m glad that Heidi is holding back now that she knows that it’s Bella’s body’s reaction not actually her wanting it for now which make everything more interesting bc she had to woo her to finally get to her completely
I’m glad that Heidi is holding back now that she knows that it’s Bella’s body’s reaction not actually her wanting it for now which make everything more interesting bc she had to woo her to finally get to her completely
2/23/2021 c7 natcityjp
Sweet! I think it's time for one of them to catch a break. Maybe Bella will fall for Heidi soon, and realize that she's pretty awesome.
Sweet! I think it's time for one of them to catch a break. Maybe Bella will fall for Heidi soon, and realize that she's pretty awesome.
2/22/2021 c7 petulantpeck10
Pure torture indeed for Heidi in all senses. I could almost feel the sexual tension. I wonder now how long the both of them will last
Pure torture indeed for Heidi in all senses. I could almost feel the sexual tension. I wonder now how long the both of them will last
2/19/2021 c7 
6Super MKatR
Oh gosh, more please. Should she just come out and tell her they were mates and that she didn’t know at first just knew she wanted her? Be completely open and honest? Tell her that he wants a relationship with her mate and turn her? Then Bella realized that was the reason for the sudden change in Heidi... maybe it would cause Bella to pause and reflect. Then after some emotional bonding and honesty, they accept their mates...?
Just what I want to happen as I can’t take the angst. Whatever you do just keep writing. I do love this pairing idea.
6Super MKatROh gosh, more please. Should she just come out and tell her they were mates and that she didn’t know at first just knew she wanted her? Be completely open and honest? Tell her that he wants a relationship with her mate and turn her? Then Bella realized that was the reason for the sudden change in Heidi... maybe it would cause Bella to pause and reflect. Then after some emotional bonding and honesty, they accept their mates...?
Just what I want to happen as I can’t take the angst. Whatever you do just keep writing. I do love this pairing idea.
2/18/2021 c7 1GothicPheonix
Poor Heidi lol. Really going to be a struggle for her. At least she was smart enough now to realize telling Bella she is her actual mate when she probably still loves Edward is not a good idea; unless she meets with Didyme who can read bonds and know whether they are mates, however that would mean Bella needs to learn to trust the Queens which will probably be a hard sell right now
1GothicPheonixPoor Heidi lol. Really going to be a struggle for her. At least she was smart enough now to realize telling Bella she is her actual mate when she probably still loves Edward is not a good idea; unless she meets with Didyme who can read bonds and know whether they are mates, however that would mean Bella needs to learn to trust the Queens which will probably be a hard sell right now
2/18/2021 c7 andrewpine
How much crap will hit the fan with the squirrel munchers when Charlie asks them where his daughter is? once she gives into Heidi how will,Bella feel I wonder?
why did they not explain to her that she is fairy boy's singer and not his mate
and all he cares about is her blood?
seriously?
How much crap will hit the fan with the squirrel munchers when Charlie asks them where his daughter is? once she gives into Heidi how will,Bella feel I wonder?
why did they not explain to her that she is fairy boy's singer and not his mate
and all he cares about is her blood?
seriously?
2/18/2021 c7 4Aticia
OMG my OTP . You made my day better :D It was short but cute I hope you will make it update soon and you have a great day. :)
4AticiaOMG my OTP . You made my day better :D It was short but cute I hope you will make it update soon and you have a great day. :)
2/18/2021 c1 whyte1427
Oh so I guess Heidi hasn't realised Bella is her mate? I love the route this fic is taking already
Oh so I guess Heidi hasn't realised Bella is her mate? I love the route this fic is taking already