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4/9/2016 c2 1kapuis
Very good.
This story go fast and I like the scene between Heidi and Bella.
I like also that the leader of Volturi are the Queens.
I look forward to read the next chapter.
4/9/2016 c2 Simballa
You have a particular habit of putting out good stories
4/8/2016 c2 AyyyeeBoss25
I can't help but to fall in love with every story you make. This is amazing, I love how dense Heidi is
4/8/2016 c2 SH4D0W44
Determined Heidi is gonna be so hot ;)
4/8/2016 c2 Arial Wolf
I would like to see you try
Ha brilliant thank you HOT too looking forward to more of this awesome story
4/8/2016 c2 5Y. Calla
Haha, I love this dense Heidi thinking its just her libido and not even thinking of the chance of Bella being her mate. And props to Bella for resisting! You should definitely continue this :D
4/8/2016 c2 EAnIL
Thank you for sharing. Im looking forward on how you will cook this stew of a story, but Im also looking forward to seeing a spicy Bella overpowering Heidi.
4/8/2016 c2 Guest
I like it a lot
4/8/2016 c2 vileniaveladorn
So not enough Heidi fics on this site.. keep up the good work
4/8/2016 c2 Aliyah81
Really good start so far. I hope youll continue ths!
4/8/2016 c2 nikolasowa
Please update! ! ! ! !
4/8/2016 c2 2IAmAPug
Ooh, possessive Heidi, I love it!
4/8/2016 c2 1lilminx22
I love it so far and I do hope that you continue it... all of your stories are amazing
4/8/2016 c2 Guest
good you put the fact that heidi gift doesn't work on bella, like most of the volturi gift.
4/8/2016 c2 crazylikeart
Ahahaha, it really looks like they haven't realized she's a shield, I wonder if they will soon...
Poor Heidi, but at least it'll be a new experience for her, wooing someone without the aid of her power. And I agree with Sulpicia, how oblivious of her not to realize what Bella is to her...
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