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11/23/2016 c2 Edelhart
Looks to be an interesting read.

The style of writing so far works well at setting the stage this fic, however when you eventually get into the story: writing of Faye's experiences instead of setting the scene, im hoping for a more personal writing style in place of the omnipotent storyteller.

Looking to see how this turns out.
7/7/2016 c1 sanbeegoldiewhitey
Very murky plot.
5/28/2016 c1 Guest
Hi its rhe twins again just looking at your storey to see if there were any more chapters but there non so about ember haveing the gift to bring back dead plants that were long gone or that were in myths by see photos or in old books or heard about them she should also maje them into tea and sale them in the real world and like pasty madicen or biells to she could have lots of shops un the mugge would and they would sale luke hot cake ok sorry we have to go and sorry that some of this is spelld wrong writing as fast as we can mom calling bye
5/17/2016 c1 Guest
hi we just want to say that this is a great story and when are the next chapters and can ember be a seer and be heir and head to some houses that were dead like lefay merlin praevell the four founders and others and she has another gift to bring back any plants that were dead and we mean by seeing it in an old book or hearing about a plant that was dead and then she will make lots and do her own gardens then her own then sale them in her shops in every wizards market and make her own clothes shops as well and they will be the best have her own book shops to that have some old books that she will have in her volts and copy some of them but not all of them and not the ones that are to die for to nooo sir she will keep those for her and her family if she has one in the near futer ok that is all for now and we are sorry it is your story not ours talk to you later and sorry to that if some of this is spelled wrong we are writing as fast as we can have to go bye from the twins
4/9/2016 c1 Guest
Looking forward to the next chapter
4/9/2016 c1 raynisia
Nice start! Feels like this story will have alot of character analysis and development. if that is true i would agree that splitting up the years will allow you to capture the story in chunks. may make it easier to keep development stages in order as well.
4/9/2016 c1 1Raven097
Good chapter
4/8/2016 c1 1Amethyst-Pheonix2003
? Wall of code. Please fix I would like to read this

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