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I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Defenders Without Fear" and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me alot. I think this is the best story which i never ever read the way you described and the emotions like each and everything is incredible. It's too good would love to hear about your upcoming stories. I'm an artist if you would like to give me a chance to draw some of your characters for your stories or something like coverart for your story so that would be my truly honour to work with you also i'll share some dope ideas with you feel free to dm.
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9/3/2024 c79 
3crazykittylover
I'm happy to see all the loose strings getting tied up nicely. I like how some of the commanders didn't have the scoop about the boys being brothers. Lolz. This chapter was really nice to read. Well paced. Everything is coming all together now. We just need Luffy to be back and up then the boys are back in town! Ha! Anyway way good job and stay inspired my friend!
3crazykittyloverI'm happy to see all the loose strings getting tied up nicely. I like how some of the commanders didn't have the scoop about the boys being brothers. Lolz. This chapter was really nice to read. Well paced. Everything is coming all together now. We just need Luffy to be back and up then the boys are back in town! Ha! Anyway way good job and stay inspired my friend!
9/3/2024 c78 crazykittylover
Love this chapter. It's nice to see the inner world of the characters at hand. I find it amusing that Marco is a little innerved by nika. Lolz. I feel bad for sabk blaming himself, he did his very best and that's all we could expect from the boy. But those boys are stubborn, neh? Whitebeard is chill and cooked well on that convo with Marco. He ate! Thank you for the chapter and keep up the good work! Stay inspired my friend!
Love this chapter. It's nice to see the inner world of the characters at hand. I find it amusing that Marco is a little innerved by nika. Lolz. I feel bad for sabk blaming himself, he did his very best and that's all we could expect from the boy. But those boys are stubborn, neh? Whitebeard is chill and cooked well on that convo with Marco. He ate! Thank you for the chapter and keep up the good work! Stay inspired my friend!
8/22/2024 c79 9Aquarica
Yay for the brothers being together for the most part even if none of them are doing so hot. Marcos perspective is always Interesting and I love that the crew finally kinda get to hear what was going on. Lovely chapter as always, glad to hear you’re enjoying your summer
9AquaricaYay for the brothers being together for the most part even if none of them are doing so hot. Marcos perspective is always Interesting and I love that the crew finally kinda get to hear what was going on. Lovely chapter as always, glad to hear you’re enjoying your summer
8/18/2024 c79 firefiststrawhat
i was just rereading this cuz i was bored like that, and daymmmm! luffy's been through a lot. i forgot how so much had happened and bro is definitely traumatised. and it definitely would take a while for him to be himself againbut i would lovee to see the progress and all that. desperate for fluff rn!
i was just rereading this cuz i was bored like that, and daymmmm! luffy's been through a lot. i forgot how so much had happened and bro is definitely traumatised. and it definitely would take a while for him to be himself againbut i would lovee to see the progress and all that. desperate for fluff rn!
8/17/2024 c77 3crazykittylover
It's nice to see the story coming to a close. I love watching some of the best fics out there getting their endings. It's bitter sweet but it's nice to see them end so well. I like this fire side chat you had between the boys. Good stuff
I can hear the boys in my head speaking their parts like actors in a play. It feels so genuine and on point. I just love the way you have the boys on the mark. Can't wait to see what the next chapter has. Tha k you for your efforts and keep up the good work my friend.
3crazykittyloverIt's nice to see the story coming to a close. I love watching some of the best fics out there getting their endings. It's bitter sweet but it's nice to see them end so well. I like this fire side chat you had between the boys. Good stuff
I can hear the boys in my head speaking their parts like actors in a play. It feels so genuine and on point. I just love the way you have the boys on the mark. Can't wait to see what the next chapter has. Tha k you for your efforts and keep up the good work my friend.
8/14/2024 c79 Wishfull-star
Lol on man Luffy causes trouble again but at least Ace woke up again even if briefly:) I'm glad that Sabo got to witness Ace waking up this time and I can't wait for whatever happens next stay safe:)
Lol on man Luffy causes trouble again but at least Ace woke up again even if briefly:) I'm glad that Sabo got to witness Ace waking up this time and I can't wait for whatever happens next stay safe:)
8/14/2024 c79 23Eternal She-Wolf
Once more, what a delightful chapter! Sabo and Marco's conversation was delightful, and Sabo finally manages to have half a conversation with Ace, and a hug! Loopy Ace continues to be a delight. I'm imagining that his recovery is going to be slow and he will keep sleeping a lot for a while, both because of his injuries and narcolepsy. I can picture him just passing out all over the place and Marco reporting to Whitebeard, deadpan: I've gotten him up to being awake a whole hour at a time. Progress.
Love the Whitebeard point of view, really looking forward to the next couple of chapters and hoping we see the commanders move from feeling betrayed to being outraged and protective on Ace's behalf.
The whole thing with Luffy loving both of his brothers but being more reliant on and used to Ace came across very well, no worries! The parallels with Ace being here to confort and protect him this time were very clear. I also imagine it's going to be an adjustment for all three of them as Ace is used to being the only one taking care of Luffy, and the first time Sabo moves to do it before he can he just stares in wonder for a while as it hits him he's not alone anymore.
Hilariously, he is extremely oblivious to the fact that Marco, Thatch & Co are taking care of him exactly the same way he is Luffy.
Also... Pretty please... Any chance of a snippet of Thatch seeing awake-but-very-high Ace for the first time?
23Eternal She-WolfOnce more, what a delightful chapter! Sabo and Marco's conversation was delightful, and Sabo finally manages to have half a conversation with Ace, and a hug! Loopy Ace continues to be a delight. I'm imagining that his recovery is going to be slow and he will keep sleeping a lot for a while, both because of his injuries and narcolepsy. I can picture him just passing out all over the place and Marco reporting to Whitebeard, deadpan: I've gotten him up to being awake a whole hour at a time. Progress.
Love the Whitebeard point of view, really looking forward to the next couple of chapters and hoping we see the commanders move from feeling betrayed to being outraged and protective on Ace's behalf.
The whole thing with Luffy loving both of his brothers but being more reliant on and used to Ace came across very well, no worries! The parallels with Ace being here to confort and protect him this time were very clear. I also imagine it's going to be an adjustment for all three of them as Ace is used to being the only one taking care of Luffy, and the first time Sabo moves to do it before he can he just stares in wonder for a while as it hits him he's not alone anymore.
Hilariously, he is extremely oblivious to the fact that Marco, Thatch & Co are taking care of him exactly the same way he is Luffy.
Also... Pretty please... Any chance of a snippet of Thatch seeing awake-but-very-high Ace for the first time?
8/10/2024 c78 pickle.juice
OMG YOURE BACK. THE WAY I INSTANTLY STARTED SMILING WHEN I SAW THE EMAIL...
first, i missed you, and your writing. how are you? how've you been? i hope things are going great for you!
second, love love love this chapter, the marco sabo relationship is one i want so much more of it, and can't find enough of, and you wrote it so GOOD. AND FINALLY, a reunion between our favorite boys, this was so exhilarating to read. the comfort was much needed after all that hurt. can't wait to see what's next, and hope you've been well!
thanks for the update!
OMG YOURE BACK. THE WAY I INSTANTLY STARTED SMILING WHEN I SAW THE EMAIL...
first, i missed you, and your writing. how are you? how've you been? i hope things are going great for you!
second, love love love this chapter, the marco sabo relationship is one i want so much more of it, and can't find enough of, and you wrote it so GOOD. AND FINALLY, a reunion between our favorite boys, this was so exhilarating to read. the comfort was much needed after all that hurt. can't wait to see what's next, and hope you've been well!
thanks for the update!
8/1/2024 c78 Polars
Whitebeard survived! Hurrah! And dear Nico, you know, survival is more important than anything, and damn Teach will get what he deserves. Embrace the best Whitebeard!
Ok, so it's time for Marco's scolding!Whitebeard will be happy to hear that Marco's complaints about his health are not in the least minor (he really can't drink in poor health, so Oyaji deserves it).
Luffy the Little Devil is an interesting idea that might help Luffy in his subsequent treatment, right? Or maybe Nika? More and more interesting www
Awwww! Sabo! Brother hug! ex- revolutionary? I don't believe that. Dragon will make Sabo remove the es later.
It's just a guess, but I hope I'm overthinking it. I noticed that Luffy touched both Axe and Sabo's faces as he approached them, confirming the brothers' presence, right? It's not temporary blindness caused by prolonged loss of air, is it? aaaaa I'm really worried (hope the kids are all right).
God! It's over time! I hope my comment isn't so late QAQ. I won't admit that I delayed reading this article for so long because I was addicted to making a beast costume! Shanks owns the hat, so when is he going to show up and make another appointment with Luffy? Oh and Garp, I'm pretty sure these two guys will go a long way in helping Luffy recover. If I remember correctly, Whitebeard doesn't seem to have spoken to Luffy in peace yet. Will that happen more? Whitebeard would have loved Ace's secret brother! Look forward to the next chapter XD
Whitebeard survived! Hurrah! And dear Nico, you know, survival is more important than anything, and damn Teach will get what he deserves. Embrace the best Whitebeard!
Ok, so it's time for Marco's scolding!Whitebeard will be happy to hear that Marco's complaints about his health are not in the least minor (he really can't drink in poor health, so Oyaji deserves it).
Luffy the Little Devil is an interesting idea that might help Luffy in his subsequent treatment, right? Or maybe Nika? More and more interesting www
Awwww! Sabo! Brother hug! ex- revolutionary? I don't believe that. Dragon will make Sabo remove the es later.
It's just a guess, but I hope I'm overthinking it. I noticed that Luffy touched both Axe and Sabo's faces as he approached them, confirming the brothers' presence, right? It's not temporary blindness caused by prolonged loss of air, is it? aaaaa I'm really worried (hope the kids are all right).
God! It's over time! I hope my comment isn't so late QAQ. I won't admit that I delayed reading this article for so long because I was addicted to making a beast costume! Shanks owns the hat, so when is he going to show up and make another appointment with Luffy? Oh and Garp, I'm pretty sure these two guys will go a long way in helping Luffy recover. If I remember correctly, Whitebeard doesn't seem to have spoken to Luffy in peace yet. Will that happen more? Whitebeard would have loved Ace's secret brother! Look forward to the next chapter XD
7/19/2024 c78 8Shandar1
Thanks for the new chapter. Liked the Whitebeard POV, and Marco struggling with his brush with Nika.
8Shandar1Thanks for the new chapter. Liked the Whitebeard POV, and Marco struggling with his brush with Nika.
7/18/2024 c78 9Aquarica
Oooh, I didn't get an email that this updated, I'm happy to read another chapter! I love the heavy Sabo view point, he really be going through it, Luffy tracing over his scar made my heart hurt and I was so happy Sabo got to see him awake. Rip Marco and the fear to the universe put into him by the strangeness the gravitates around Luffy.
Absolutely lovely chapter, Sabo being mad at Marco for making him take medicine but trying to be civil is just too perfect!
9AquaricaOooh, I didn't get an email that this updated, I'm happy to read another chapter! I love the heavy Sabo view point, he really be going through it, Luffy tracing over his scar made my heart hurt and I was so happy Sabo got to see him awake. Rip Marco and the fear to the universe put into him by the strangeness the gravitates around Luffy.
Absolutely lovely chapter, Sabo being mad at Marco for making him take medicine but trying to be civil is just too perfect!
7/17/2024 c78 23Eternal She-Wolf
Whitebeard point of view! Always very interesting, and of course poor Marco is on the verge of a mental breakdown and not communicating his anxieties very well. He needs a nap, ASL to wake up, and a long vacation, in that order.
I don’t know if you plan on writing the meeting where Marco, Thatch & co share everything they’ve learned about Ace and the reasons for his actions but I suspect that would be a fascinating read.
We get some Sabo and Luffy bonding, yay! We’ve gotten a lot of Ace and Luffy in recent chapters – I’m not complaining, I’m very partial to them – so it’s nice to see Luffy also remembering his other brother isn’t dead. I suspect that for a time Luffy is going to be uninterested in anyone but Ace and to an extent Sabo (he’s not used to having him around yet, unlike Ace who was a huge part of his life for seven years). Thatch will be heartbroken but understanding, however once Luffy starts improving, Thatch is the first person he will bond with (again).
23Eternal She-WolfWhitebeard point of view! Always very interesting, and of course poor Marco is on the verge of a mental breakdown and not communicating his anxieties very well. He needs a nap, ASL to wake up, and a long vacation, in that order.
I don’t know if you plan on writing the meeting where Marco, Thatch & co share everything they’ve learned about Ace and the reasons for his actions but I suspect that would be a fascinating read.
We get some Sabo and Luffy bonding, yay! We’ve gotten a lot of Ace and Luffy in recent chapters – I’m not complaining, I’m very partial to them – so it’s nice to see Luffy also remembering his other brother isn’t dead. I suspect that for a time Luffy is going to be uninterested in anyone but Ace and to an extent Sabo (he’s not used to having him around yet, unlike Ace who was a huge part of his life for seven years). Thatch will be heartbroken but understanding, however once Luffy starts improving, Thatch is the first person he will bond with (again).