for For a Roll of The Dice5/13/2016 c2 
1Echo0100
I love this story already, she has Kaguya sealed in her? Hmm, she seems to treat Naruko like her own daughter that's pretty cool. I don't know if I really like Kushina so far though, seems like Kaguya is more Naruko's mom than she is.
1Echo0100I love this story already, she has Kaguya sealed in her? Hmm, she seems to treat Naruko like her own daughter that's pretty cool. I don't know if I really like Kushina so far though, seems like Kaguya is more Naruko's mom than she is.
5/13/2016 c2 MysticSpider
"Eh, kaa-chan is a bunny girl?"
...
She has no idea how offensive that line is for Kyuubi, does she?
Also, for line breaks,
The Awesome Line Break For The Utterly Retarted Blond Chakra Monsters
"Eh, kaa-chan is a bunny girl?"
...
She has no idea how offensive that line is for Kyuubi, does she?
Also, for line breaks,
The Awesome Line Break For The Utterly Retarted Blond Chakra Monsters
4/9/2016 c1 Tzekel Khan
interesting story. Could improve a little, but it's still better than many other stories. It has style, decent grammar and lots of potental. keem 'em coming darling! you got it!
interesting story. Could improve a little, but it's still better than many other stories. It has style, decent grammar and lots of potental. keem 'em coming darling! you got it!