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5/15/2016 c2 egwolf65
Great story!
5/15/2016 c2 ThunderClaw03
Great job keep it up update soon
5/13/2016 c2 1Echo0100
I love this story already, she has Kaguya sealed in her? Hmm, she seems to treat Naruko like her own daughter that's pretty cool. I don't know if I really like Kushina so far though, seems like Kaguya is more Naruko's mom than she is.
5/13/2016 c2 TheBeauty
Nice story :)
5/13/2016 c2 MysticSpider
"Eh, kaa-chan is a bunny girl?"
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She has no idea how offensive that line is for Kyuubi, does she?

Also, for line breaks,

The Awesome Line Break For The Utterly Retarted Blond Chakra Monsters
4/9/2016 c1 8GNY-002 Gundam Sadalsuud
haha..i love it..its funny and fun to read.. update soon..!
4/9/2016 c1 Tzekel Khan
interesting story. Could improve a little, but it's still better than many other stories. It has style, decent grammar and lots of potental. keem 'em coming darling! you got it!
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