for 100-Drabble Challenge5/19 c1 Gracen1b8
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10/28/2016 c1 flyingarrow
nice! at first I didn't get it.
nice! at first I didn't get it.
9/29/2016 c15 
47LadyLindariel
BWHAHAHAHAHA! Oh Aragorn you are going to regret that so bad! Get him back Legolas! Awesome drabble mellon, hope to see more soon!
47LadyLindarielBWHAHAHAHAHA! Oh Aragorn you are going to regret that so bad! Get him back Legolas! Awesome drabble mellon, hope to see more soon!
9/15/2016 c15 Lord Illyren
It's a good thing they are friends. If they weren't, I would be afraid for Aragirns life right now:)
It's a good thing they are friends. If they weren't, I would be afraid for Aragirns life right now:)
9/2/2016 c15 29Eldhoron
Okay. I'm not gonna lie... That was hilarious XD XD at first I was like "oh is he gonna set up his plans then maybe a second drabble be the thing" (bc it was so short :p) and then the haze... (Which was good description for this drabble; really good for such a short space you put it in) I really just put it in my mind that Aragorn was was looking on the morning outside BUT THEN THE END HAPPENED
Hahahaha! That was just... XD XD If I had been drinking I probably would have choked :p Good on! Legolas is gonna be so mad *sniggers* :p
29EldhoronOkay. I'm not gonna lie... That was hilarious XD XD at first I was like "oh is he gonna set up his plans then maybe a second drabble be the thing" (bc it was so short :p) and then the haze... (Which was good description for this drabble; really good for such a short space you put it in) I really just put it in my mind that Aragorn was was looking on the morning outside BUT THEN THE END HAPPENED
Hahahaha! That was just... XD XD If I had been drinking I probably would have choked :p Good on! Legolas is gonna be so mad *sniggers* :p
5/4/2016 c13 Eldhoron
HAHA! He caught em! That was funny. I needed it. Thanks for writing.
I find it very interesting that you put Thranduil and Elrond so close in friendship.
HAHA! He caught em! That was funny. I needed it. Thanks for writing.
I find it very interesting that you put Thranduil and Elrond so close in friendship.
5/2/2016 c13 LadyLindariel
LOLOLOL! I loved this. Man I'm getting ideas reading your stuff! Pray tell me what happened over 2000 years ago!
LOLOLOL! I loved this. Man I'm getting ideas reading your stuff! Pray tell me what happened over 2000 years ago!
5/2/2016 c12 LadyLindariel
This was deep. So sad, but I refuse to believe that Thranduil never sailed. I just can't believe that. Nevertheless very well done
This was deep. So sad, but I refuse to believe that Thranduil never sailed. I just can't believe that. Nevertheless very well done
5/2/2016 c12 29Eldhoron
This was certainly a different take. I wasn't sure exactly what act Thranduil was talking about but perhaps it was vague on purpose?
I personally think, regarding the page breakers, that the entire poem could have done without the breakers at all. It would have been less choppy. Perhaps just omit them all in the entirety and stick with regular paragraph breaks throughout. It will probably flow easier too. :) just my con. crit.
29EldhoronThis was certainly a different take. I wasn't sure exactly what act Thranduil was talking about but perhaps it was vague on purpose?
I personally think, regarding the page breakers, that the entire poem could have done without the breakers at all. It would have been less choppy. Perhaps just omit them all in the entirety and stick with regular paragraph breaks throughout. It will probably flow easier too. :) just my con. crit.
4/28/2016 c11 47LadyLindariel
I cringed in pain as Legolas poured the wine on Aragorn and then scrubbed him. Oh man poor Aragorn. ...
47LadyLindarielI cringed in pain as Legolas poured the wine on Aragorn and then scrubbed him. Oh man poor Aragorn. ...