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3/21 c2 darthkratos24
This...is meh
3/21 c1 darthkratos24
And this suffers the same fate a lot of Harry potter story's suffer that really bloody annoys me. If you're going to write a story in freaking England with English kids and English people! Make them fucking sound English! Not yanks we don't say couch we don't say candy we don't say garbage can! Look into learning the actual English language most call it the queen's English because then you'll have a story of British kids not weird Americans trying desperately to seem like their us... Good god's it's unreal the amount of story's do this, they get a French person they go all the way to give them an accent but no one seems to know only Americans English speaking Mexicans and some Japanese use the words you're using because when other countries learn English they get the one that's been around for hundreds of years
3/29/2020 c6 4597boss
more please
10/21/2019 c6 3WhiteElfElder
I think Atrocitius just made the wrong enemy. Harry really needs a non-construct-non-energy weapon to help in fights.
1/22/2019 c6 Guest
Why you dont describe anyone?
1/9/2019 c6 Argonaut986
1/9/2019 c5 Argonaut986
Atrocious is a fool to try and recruit Harry Potter.
1/9/2019 c4 Argonaut986
That could be a problem.
1/9/2019 c3 Argonaut986
Harry and Zord did extremely well.
1/9/2019 c2 Argonaut986
1/9/2019 c1 Argonaut986
11/30/2018 c6 Ranmaleopard
This is just really interesting and I can't wait for more. Please continue
10/21/2018 c6 Jostanos
Omake: "AROCITUS!" Harry roared, but when he checked his surrounding he didn't see a debris field, or even his fellow Lanterns, but a Great Hall filled with children, adults, and a flaming cup. "huh.." Harry blinks "I wonder how I got here when I was in space not that long ago." "Cease your lying, Potter!" exclaims a Greasy Haired man who happened to point a stick at him "Where have you been for the past few years!" Harry sighs and cleans out one of his ears with a pinkie finger before he replies "I told where I've been you Greasy Haired, rude, about to have that stick shoved up your" "HARRY!" Exclaims A long Bearded Gentleman seated not too far from Tall-dark-and-Greasy "Now is not the time for insults! It is the time, however, for you to join your fellow champions into the anti room behind this table." "Why should I?" "BECAUSE YOU ENTERED THE TRI WIZARD TOURNAMENT, MORON!" Exclaims a jealous red head from the red Hourglass table. "Oh really?" Harry replies with a raised eyebrow. "and _HOW_ may I have put my name into _that_ Goblet when I haven't even been here before, nor have I been on this Planet for over five or so years!"
10/16/2018 c6 13creativesm75
very good
10/7/2018 c6 1Geni Blaze
Nuuuuuu! Nyeeeeeet! Nooooooo!

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