for How to say goodbye?8/8/2016 c6 
4LiliumHeart
Hey :) Sorry, I've just realized I didn't give you any feedback on this. I'll just say I loved every single chapter and once more you showed how amazing you are at portraying each character's feelings. No exception. And, well, I can't avoid saying that I loved Zhante and Nina/Lucas conforting scenes, they're always so sweet to each other. This story is sad, but so beautifully written! Keep up with your great works!
4LiliumHeartHey :) Sorry, I've just realized I didn't give you any feedback on this. I'll just say I loved every single chapter and once more you showed how amazing you are at portraying each character's feelings. No exception. And, well, I can't avoid saying that I loved Zhante and Nina/Lucas conforting scenes, they're always so sweet to each other. This story is sad, but so beautifully written! Keep up with your great works!
6/22/2016 c6 1IreneRays
Oh my God, this is so sad and cute at the same time...i have mixed emotions...However, i cant not comment how beautiful your work was once again!
Keep it up please~
1IreneRaysOh my God, this is so sad and cute at the same time...i have mixed emotions...However, i cant not comment how beautiful your work was once again!
Keep it up please~
6/3/2016 c6 PTAtomic78
Awwwwwwww Lucas!
You poor baby!
You didn't deserve anything that happened to you!
Awwwwwwww Lucas!
You poor baby!
You didn't deserve anything that happened to you!
6/3/2016 c5 PTAtomic78
It is defo satisfying.
The thing is Dante and Zhalia are strong as well as not being THAT close to Sophie. But most of all they have each other. They've probably lost teammates and friends before. Especially Zhalia. It's not a job without danger.
They'll continue to grieve but they've learned how to carry on.
Whereas for someone like Lok, it'll seem damn near impossible.
It is defo satisfying.
The thing is Dante and Zhalia are strong as well as not being THAT close to Sophie. But most of all they have each other. They've probably lost teammates and friends before. Especially Zhalia. It's not a job without danger.
They'll continue to grieve but they've learned how to carry on.
Whereas for someone like Lok, it'll seem damn near impossible.
6/3/2016 c4 PTAtomic78
Awwww Lok!
I think his mother comforting him (or trying to) is so sweeeeet though. I love that they have such a strong relationship.
Awwww Lok!
I think his mother comforting him (or trying to) is so sweeeeet though. I love that they have such a strong relationship.
6/3/2016 c3 PTAtomic78
Very consistent with Santiago. That guy was another one that was extremely loyal to her. I feel sorry for him though (in general I mean) It's like when Happy quit working as Tony Stark's bodyguard because people were laughing at him for being the bodyguard of Iron Man.
That's kinda similiar to what's happened with Santiago. However he continues to serve her. But I dare say I think that even with her vulnerablity and her impulsivity, his job is rather unnecessary. But what else can that poor young man do?
He's spent his whole life in her employment, devoted to protecting her.
Anyway! A nice chapter!
Very consistent with Santiago. That guy was another one that was extremely loyal to her. I feel sorry for him though (in general I mean) It's like when Happy quit working as Tony Stark's bodyguard because people were laughing at him for being the bodyguard of Iron Man.
That's kinda similiar to what's happened with Santiago. However he continues to serve her. But I dare say I think that even with her vulnerablity and her impulsivity, his job is rather unnecessary. But what else can that poor young man do?
He's spent his whole life in her employment, devoted to protecting her.
Anyway! A nice chapter!
4/23/2016 c6 1SaraNero
Aweee thats so cute! I loved how you added Nina and made her stay by Lucas side. Of course he would be a mess and with his sisters death, its only logical that he would also be restless. Nina being the one to comfort and calm him was a nice idea and I think that thats exactly what he needs, a little closure and someone to hold onto during these difficult and hard times.
Another beautiful chapter!
1SaraNeroAweee thats so cute! I loved how you added Nina and made her stay by Lucas side. Of course he would be a mess and with his sisters death, its only logical that he would also be restless. Nina being the one to comfort and calm him was a nice idea and I think that thats exactly what he needs, a little closure and someone to hold onto during these difficult and hard times.
Another beautiful chapter!
4/22/2016 c5 SaraNero
Awe thats so sad!
I just received your PM and was about to reply when I got the notification that you updated.
I was like "damn that sure was quick!" And as soon as I saw the title I was even more excited!
I was curious as to how Dante and Zhalia would react since as you have already mentioned, they weren't as close as the others with Sophie but we're friends nonetheless.
It surely was a challenge, but you managed it pretty well! I honestly liked this chapter as much as I liked the others, you never fail to amaze me!:)
Awe thats so sad!
I just received your PM and was about to reply when I got the notification that you updated.
I was like "damn that sure was quick!" And as soon as I saw the title I was even more excited!
I was curious as to how Dante and Zhalia would react since as you have already mentioned, they weren't as close as the others with Sophie but we're friends nonetheless.
It surely was a challenge, but you managed it pretty well! I honestly liked this chapter as much as I liked the others, you never fail to amaze me!:)
4/22/2016 c4 SaraNero
Aweee poor Lok!:(
I wanna hug him and hide him from the world tbh, he is so precious.
Aweee poor Lok!:(
I wanna hug him and hide him from the world tbh, he is so precious.
4/20/2016 c3 1SaraNero
Poor Santiago...this was so heart-breaking and beautifully written! It's just what my fangirl heart needs and I am really looking forward to the next chapters! Personally, I wouldn't mind if you put all Casterwills (except for Lucas of course) in one chapter. Everything is fine with me though:)
1SaraNeroPoor Santiago...this was so heart-breaking and beautifully written! It's just what my fangirl heart needs and I am really looking forward to the next chapters! Personally, I wouldn't mind if you put all Casterwills (except for Lucas of course) in one chapter. Everything is fine with me though:)
4/18/2016 c2 SaraNero
Poor LeBlanche! That was really Heartbreaking. I am pleasantly surprised that you decided to show how LeBlanche dealt with Sophie's death first. This poor guy unfortunately gets forgotten a lot of times and I can imagine that he would be pretty devasted if a situation such as this were to arise.
As always, I loved it!
Poor LeBlanche! That was really Heartbreaking. I am pleasantly surprised that you decided to show how LeBlanche dealt with Sophie's death first. This poor guy unfortunately gets forgotten a lot of times and I can imagine that he would be pretty devasted if a situation such as this were to arise.
As always, I loved it!
4/17/2016 c1 PTAtomic78
Oh wow!
This is going to cause some heartbreak for most characters, especially Lucas. That was his sister who he desperately tried to avoid this happening to.
Oh wow!
This is going to cause some heartbreak for most characters, especially Lucas. That was his sister who he desperately tried to avoid this happening to.