for Fate: Gamer Night - SE10/4/2022 c36 Guest
Oh damn!
Oh damn!
10/4/2022 c6 Man Man
Man, this pedo shite is not what I signed up for when I chose to read this, though I guess I was warned, but still, uehg.
Man, this pedo shite is not what I signed up for when I chose to read this, though I guess I was warned, but still, uehg.
10/4/2022 c29 Fausto Neto
And that ends up making the story boring, since basically every female villain will always beat the mc, it seems that no matter what a woman does in the end mc will act like "hero simp of justice" and will forgive all women, and with the guys he's going to kill them all, I thought that by talking about adult history you would make her more realistic, like those guys he killed, and Ryoko all did basically the same thing, they both put one of his girlfriends at risk, because her Is punishment so different? and don't come up with a story that the mc had no other alternative, I'm talking outside the perspective of the story, but from the author's perspective, you could have done this part in a very different way even doing an arc where he found out that Rangiku who did this shit happens, where he learns not to trust someone he doesn't know very well, but no you just made him act super weird, like everything Ryoko did to him and Saeko didn't matter.
And that ends up making the story boring, since basically every female villain will always beat the mc, it seems that no matter what a woman does in the end mc will act like "hero simp of justice" and will forgive all women, and with the guys he's going to kill them all, I thought that by talking about adult history you would make her more realistic, like those guys he killed, and Ryoko all did basically the same thing, they both put one of his girlfriends at risk, because her Is punishment so different? and don't come up with a story that the mc had no other alternative, I'm talking outside the perspective of the story, but from the author's perspective, you could have done this part in a very different way even doing an arc where he found out that Rangiku who did this shit happens, where he learns not to trust someone he doesn't know very well, but no you just made him act super weird, like everything Ryoko did to him and Saeko didn't matter.
10/4/2022 c28 Fausto Neto
I would find a way to save Saeko, maybe making a deal with her, and then I would kill her, as many times she killed the mc, he just didn't really die because he has the protagonist's power to receive a power up in the right time, if he and his girlfriend wouldn't be dead, all this because of a totally selfish desire, as I said she deserves to die, mc killed a man for threatening Taiga, I should kill her too, I found it disappointing that she got away with it after "kill" him so many times, and remembering that every time he dies Saeko would also die indirectly, but she could let Saeko go after taking his corpse, yes, but Saeko would probably kill herself after trying to kill her, at least from the start. way she has acted until now.
I would find a way to save Saeko, maybe making a deal with her, and then I would kill her, as many times she killed the mc, he just didn't really die because he has the protagonist's power to receive a power up in the right time, if he and his girlfriend wouldn't be dead, all this because of a totally selfish desire, as I said she deserves to die, mc killed a man for threatening Taiga, I should kill her too, I found it disappointing that she got away with it after "kill" him so many times, and remembering that every time he dies Saeko would also die indirectly, but she could let Saeko go after taking his corpse, yes, but Saeko would probably kill herself after trying to kill her, at least from the start. way she has acted until now.
10/4/2022 c36 
1Trasgo Madaraz Artifex
Nice~
With the description of the place and the onis, I was hoping but not really believing if we're gonna had something about Shuten or Ibaraki.
Good to see my hope was right.
1Trasgo Madaraz ArtifexNice~
With the description of the place and the onis, I was hoping but not really believing if we're gonna had something about Shuten or Ibaraki.
Good to see my hope was right.
10/4/2022 c36 Rider126
You have got to be kidding me, this early in the game you through freaking Shuten Doji at him, really?
You have got to be kidding me, this early in the game you through freaking Shuten Doji at him, really?
10/4/2022 c36 T-B-R
fufufu~ subdue her somehow shirou! use your harem protagonist powers or something, a whimsical Oni like Shuten is quite possible.
fufufu~ subdue her somehow shirou! use your harem protagonist powers or something, a whimsical Oni like Shuten is quite possible.
10/4/2022 c36 paolotejadaj
Great to see you back!
Now that, I didn’t expect.
I can’t wait to see how it is going to develop
Keep the great work!
Great to see you back!
Now that, I didn’t expect.
I can’t wait to see how it is going to develop
Keep the great work!