for Fate: Gamer Night - SE10/3/2016 c6 MysticSpider
Welp, pedophilia happened. But we don't judge in fanfiction, we just criticize.
Also, I noticed that you used c-u-m correctly 2 times, then you used 'come'. The word 'come' and 'coming' is only used in phrases that a shota having his first would say (because they probably don't know the term 'c-u-m. the correct words are 'c-u-m' 'c-u-mming' and 'came'. Yes, came is both words' past tense. Also the word 'cum' probably gets censored if I use it here, that's why there are '-' between letters.
Welp, pedophilia happened. But we don't judge in fanfiction, we just criticize.
Also, I noticed that you used c-u-m correctly 2 times, then you used 'come'. The word 'come' and 'coming' is only used in phrases that a shota having his first would say (because they probably don't know the term 'c-u-m. the correct words are 'c-u-m' 'c-u-mming' and 'came'. Yes, came is both words' past tense. Also the word 'cum' probably gets censored if I use it here, that's why there are '-' between letters.
10/2/2016 c6 Guest
I am Shirou Emiya, the Derriere Apostle, and I crave ass!
On another note, nice chapter. I hope to see more out of you.
I am Shirou Emiya, the Derriere Apostle, and I crave ass!
On another note, nice chapter. I hope to see more out of you.
10/1/2016 c6 reydrago
ah finally done reading this, and did shirou get bonus skill for geting stat at X points? if no for shame
ah finally done reading this, and did shirou get bonus skill for geting stat at X points? if no for shame
9/30/2016 c6 gjin19
Why doesn't Shiro use projection and reinforcement with blades. Wouldn't he get bonus experience to those skills in that case?
Why doesn't Shiro use projection and reinforcement with blades. Wouldn't he get bonus experience to those skills in that case?
9/30/2016 c6 D
CHR is 77 and rises without prompts from Shirou with each successful romance..."swords grinding", oh..oh I get how this multiverse's Archer came to be.
"So you came back to kill me because your ideal betrayed you?"
"What?! NO! Something much worse happened, as my charisma rose combined with our ideal to save everyone eventually lead me to have a harem comprised of nearly every female we met. Also don't thing you will ever stop being a shota even if it is just in age terms, after all how do you think i sealed the pact with Alaya..."
"Shirou was it is he talking about?"
"Yeah, is he threatening my cute little student?"
As he looked at his future selve's weary and haunted face while being accosted by his most certainly-not-harem Shirou realized he might have dun goofed.
Thanks for the update eagerly awaiting more. Also can't wait for Shirou to start meeting some dead apostles females, the expression i need an adult would fit hilariously.
CHR is 77 and rises without prompts from Shirou with each successful romance..."swords grinding", oh..oh I get how this multiverse's Archer came to be.
"So you came back to kill me because your ideal betrayed you?"
"What?! NO! Something much worse happened, as my charisma rose combined with our ideal to save everyone eventually lead me to have a harem comprised of nearly every female we met. Also don't thing you will ever stop being a shota even if it is just in age terms, after all how do you think i sealed the pact with Alaya..."
"Shirou was it is he talking about?"
"Yeah, is he threatening my cute little student?"
As he looked at his future selve's weary and haunted face while being accosted by his most certainly-not-harem Shirou realized he might have dun goofed.
Thanks for the update eagerly awaiting more. Also can't wait for Shirou to start meeting some dead apostles females, the expression i need an adult would fit hilariously.
9/30/2016 c6 This Illusion
Honestly want to see Scathach or something. I'm sick of the conventional servants appearing. And nice chapter makes me wonder what would happen when his charisma exceeds Gil and such
Honestly want to see Scathach or something. I'm sick of the conventional servants appearing. And nice chapter makes me wonder what would happen when his charisma exceeds Gil and such
9/30/2016 c6 The Demi God of Win
I think you struck an excellent balance.
Also, I believe you have done a good job balancing story and mechanic, as opposed to what is common in "Gamer" fics, where so much focus is on the "game mechanics" that the story bogs down horribly.
Looking forward to your progression,
The Demi-God of Win
I think you struck an excellent balance.
Also, I believe you have done a good job balancing story and mechanic, as opposed to what is common in "Gamer" fics, where so much focus is on the "game mechanics" that the story bogs down horribly.
Looking forward to your progression,
The Demi-God of Win
9/29/2016 c6 
107thManiac
Well, the harem has begun eh? Haha.
On a more serious note though good update. I was curious how much Saeko knew about the Moonlit World, it was obvious there was some supernatural goings on on her family's property and she dealt with it regularly but we never knew if she was just aware the mystical side existed or if her knowledge is more in depth, like knowing what a magus is. So that's one question answered, and now Shirou has someone to go to for talking about magi things with, even if Saeko doesn't seem to be a magus herself, nor capable of performing mysteries past that one she mentioned with the sword to keep the Dead...er, dead.
I thought the lemon was well done, didn't find it awkward or in poor taste, aside from the possible issues the ages may bring to some but I personally find it a non-issue. It is fiction after all.
So yeah, looking forward to the next chapter. Poor Taiga, I agree but...well it's probably going to be hilarious so that's fine hehe.
107thManiacWell, the harem has begun eh? Haha.
On a more serious note though good update. I was curious how much Saeko knew about the Moonlit World, it was obvious there was some supernatural goings on on her family's property and she dealt with it regularly but we never knew if she was just aware the mystical side existed or if her knowledge is more in depth, like knowing what a magus is. So that's one question answered, and now Shirou has someone to go to for talking about magi things with, even if Saeko doesn't seem to be a magus herself, nor capable of performing mysteries past that one she mentioned with the sword to keep the Dead...er, dead.
I thought the lemon was well done, didn't find it awkward or in poor taste, aside from the possible issues the ages may bring to some but I personally find it a non-issue. It is fiction after all.
So yeah, looking forward to the next chapter. Poor Taiga, I agree but...well it's probably going to be hilarious so that's fine hehe.