for Fate: Gamer Night - SE9/29/2016 c6 Guest
Does it make me a sick person that i enjoyed reading this? oh well its well written and i enjoyed it and i cant wait for more and too see how Taiga will react to shirous CHR
Does it make me a sick person that i enjoyed reading this? oh well its well written and i enjoyed it and i cant wait for more and too see how Taiga will react to shirous CHR
9/28/2016 c6 Shank5
Shirou as a living sword was away going to be used/wielded as a living sword. What he needs are top/doms that care for and maintain the him after they use him. just like a good swordsman(swordswomen in this case) dose with there sword.
the advantage Shirou has as a living sword is that if a dom/wielded does not care and maintain him he does not have to let them wield/dom him anymore.
Shirou as a living sword was away going to be used/wielded as a living sword. What he needs are top/doms that care for and maintain the him after they use him. just like a good swordsman(swordswomen in this case) dose with there sword.
the advantage Shirou has as a living sword is that if a dom/wielded does not care and maintain him he does not have to let them wield/dom him anymore.
9/28/2016 c6 kyuzo3567
As I said in my last review I'm not a big fan of submissive MC'S, especially when they are male since I tend to be more dominate myself but you did avoid the sado-masochism which was good so I'll keep with the story for now to see where it goes
As I said in my last review I'm not a big fan of submissive MC'S, especially when they are male since I tend to be more dominate myself but you did avoid the sado-masochism which was good so I'll keep with the story for now to see where it goes
9/28/2016 c6 TheB
Man, great chapter. You definitely did well with Shirou's character. I can totally see him agreeing to sex just to save someone. (not to mention a beautiful someone helped along by his newly discovered hormones, heh)
I think you hit the balance quite well, he surely did not come off as a wimp, most of his reluctance came from being afraid for her, not afraid of, so that's quite fitting.
Man, great chapter. You definitely did well with Shirou's character. I can totally see him agreeing to sex just to save someone. (not to mention a beautiful someone helped along by his newly discovered hormones, heh)
I think you hit the balance quite well, he surely did not come off as a wimp, most of his reluctance came from being afraid for her, not afraid of, so that's quite fitting.
9/28/2016 c6 Guest
let saeko get knock up
let saeko get knock up
109/28/2016 c6 angrycritique
That CHR is like twice is STR stats. Damn son.
Things are heating up for Shirou and will saeko still be a part of other quest lines?
That CHR is like twice is STR stats. Damn son.
Things are heating up for Shirou and will saeko still be a part of other quest lines?
9/28/2016 c4 kira09
Just to note. Shirou's Dex and Str was 40 last chapter and 30 now which is right?
Just to note. Shirou's Dex and Str was 40 last chapter and 30 now which is right?
9/28/2016 c6 Guest
Shota raep. Funny shit is about to start with that chr stat block
Shota raep. Funny shit is about to start with that chr stat block
9/28/2016 c6 Archer headass
Is Archer gonna be the future version of this Shirou it would be hilarious if he was super dominate after being a sub in his early years.
Is Archer gonna be the future version of this Shirou it would be hilarious if he was super dominate after being a sub in his early years.
9/28/2016 c6 gaiawolf
Ho boy. That much charisma? When will he be more charismatic then Gilgamesh? Now the fun starts, Shirou, being the good gamer he is needs to train his new skill. Poor Saeko, though I don't think she would mind.
Ho boy. That much charisma? When will he be more charismatic then Gilgamesh? Now the fun starts, Shirou, being the good gamer he is needs to train his new skill. Poor Saeko, though I don't think she would mind.