
10/9/2022 c12 I reject
Pervy-amory.
Nope
Head-it.
Read:
Trapped Under Ice
by Thayerblue1.
A better example of how the ladies would share their man.
Not some disgusting “shared affection” between each other.
Bleh
Nope.
Ladies with their man, him with each of them.
Pervy-amory.
Nope
Head-it.
Read:
Trapped Under Ice
by Thayerblue1.
A better example of how the ladies would share their man.
Not some disgusting “shared affection” between each other.
Bleh
Nope.
Ladies with their man, him with each of them.
10/9/2022 c11 Again
If a sewing kit counted as blades, couldn’t be just develop his blade-tailoring?
If a sewing kit counted as blades, couldn’t be just develop his blade-tailoring?
10/9/2022 c11 I prefer
bubbajck’s idea for Taiga in
Spark of Madcraft
For her grandfather to be the local oyabun of the yakuza/
protector of the city.
bubbajck’s idea for Taiga in
Spark of Madcraft
For her grandfather to be the local oyabun of the yakuza/
protector of the city.
10/9/2022 c11 I just
realized something.
If Shirou wanted to use the “broken” skill for blades, why not add a small/tiny/mini blade to any item. Somewhere where it would be harmless, but be structurally a part of the item.
Thus, all things become blade.
Look out.
Broke just went warp-drive.
realized something.
If Shirou wanted to use the “broken” skill for blades, why not add a small/tiny/mini blade to any item. Somewhere where it would be harmless, but be structurally a part of the item.
Thus, all things become blade.
Look out.
Broke just went warp-drive.
10/9/2022 c11 Looking
forward to him meeting and helping Sakura.
She, with redemption, is my favorite, overall, female of the series.
forward to him meeting and helping Sakura.
She, with redemption, is my favorite, overall, female of the series.
10/9/2022 c11 Yep
I now see this as this story’s Bleach version of Danmachi.
I now see this as this story’s Bleach version of Danmachi.
10/9/2022 c10 And now
We have the perfect formula for this story’s version of Danmachi...
We have the perfect formula for this story’s version of Danmachi...
10/9/2022 c6 To point
You did warn us.
That said.
Definitely thinking of him as a teenager.
It is morally reprehensible to think otherwise.
And honestly, makes me wonder who you are to write otherwise?
You did warn us.
That said.
Definitely thinking of him as a teenager.
It is morally reprehensible to think otherwise.
And honestly, makes me wonder who you are to write otherwise?
10/9/2022 c6 Head-it
At least imagining him as thirteen, and not ten.
At least imagining him as thirteen, and not ten.
10/9/2022 c4 Should
have included insane eroge-anime type stuff.
Example:
SAO: The Eroge
by SaintInfernalNeos
Excellent work, that.
have included insane eroge-anime type stuff.
Example:
SAO: The Eroge
by SaintInfernalNeos
Excellent work, that.
10/9/2022 c4 Comment
Wait?
Doesn’t Shirou want to make people smile?
So if that’s the case,
Why would he cause of a bunch of young girls to be broken-hearted?!
That’s a point against his ideals.
P.S. semi-silly/ serious there.
Wait?
Doesn’t Shirou want to make people smile?
So if that’s the case,
Why would he cause of a bunch of young girls to be broken-hearted?!
That’s a point against his ideals.
P.S. semi-silly/ serious there.
10/10/2022 c18 zeek17
Sigh. This would've been so much better if you'd keep OCs to manageable level...
Sigh. This would've been so much better if you'd keep OCs to manageable level...