for Fate: Gamer Night - SE6/23/2016 c1 droffatsstafford
Hmm... an overpowered Gamer!Shota!Shirou being sexually harassed by older women? If I had money, I'd be throwing it at the screen, shouting, "SHUT UP AND TAKE MY MONEY!" But I don't, so I can't. I'll just settle for throwing my empty, soulless wallet instead.
I have a feeling I'll be laughing my ass off in the near future.
(A good thing, considering my ill humor as of late, so I'm thankful.)
Anyway, I know I'll enjoy this for some good laughs, but I'm also really hoping that it doesn't suck ass in the story department. I'd probably have an idea of how the writing may turn out if I read your other works, but I'm... wary... of doing that.
...Is it strange that I actually care about the plot more than anything else? xD
(What IS strange how I'm one of the few reviewers that actually give a damn about typing reviews with proper grammar... or something approaching it.)
Eyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy, look at all those things I'm not usually fond of! (That is, rape, mind control, and NTR.) ...I mean, if it's well-written, then fine; I can rarely complain when the characters and events fit. (And really, I'd have no right to complain when the time comes; you stated clearly that it shall be in here. Here's hoping that it isn't bad... Then again, things are totally different depending on who the victim is.)
tl;dr (too long; didn't read): This made me smile, I'm looking forward to the story more than I probably should, and I won't complain about the genres I don't like. I'm also going to feel incredibly dirty. I already do, actually, but there's always room for improvement. ;)
Here's to a new chapter in the near future! :D
-Droffatsstafford, a Grammar Nazi
P.S.: This is probably the most eloquent review you'll get from me... Probably. Then again, I'm typing this while suffering from 0 stamina points, so who knows. ...Oops, I just negated the purpose of the post-script in the post-script! Silly me.
Hmm... an overpowered Gamer!Shota!Shirou being sexually harassed by older women? If I had money, I'd be throwing it at the screen, shouting, "SHUT UP AND TAKE MY MONEY!" But I don't, so I can't. I'll just settle for throwing my empty, soulless wallet instead.
I have a feeling I'll be laughing my ass off in the near future.
(A good thing, considering my ill humor as of late, so I'm thankful.)
Anyway, I know I'll enjoy this for some good laughs, but I'm also really hoping that it doesn't suck ass in the story department. I'd probably have an idea of how the writing may turn out if I read your other works, but I'm... wary... of doing that.
...Is it strange that I actually care about the plot more than anything else? xD
(What IS strange how I'm one of the few reviewers that actually give a damn about typing reviews with proper grammar... or something approaching it.)
Eyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy, look at all those things I'm not usually fond of! (That is, rape, mind control, and NTR.) ...I mean, if it's well-written, then fine; I can rarely complain when the characters and events fit. (And really, I'd have no right to complain when the time comes; you stated clearly that it shall be in here. Here's hoping that it isn't bad... Then again, things are totally different depending on who the victim is.)
tl;dr (too long; didn't read): This made me smile, I'm looking forward to the story more than I probably should, and I won't complain about the genres I don't like. I'm also going to feel incredibly dirty. I already do, actually, but there's always room for improvement. ;)
Here's to a new chapter in the near future! :D
-Droffatsstafford, a Grammar Nazi
P.S.: This is probably the most eloquent review you'll get from me... Probably. Then again, I'm typing this while suffering from 0 stamina points, so who knows. ...Oops, I just negated the purpose of the post-script in the post-script! Silly me.
5/27/2016 c1 
1Kasbat
Nice chapter is shirou going to get with Taiga because there is a really lacking amount of choices for that pairing when it comes to stories.
1KasbatNice chapter is shirou going to get with Taiga because there is a really lacking amount of choices for that pairing when it comes to stories.
5/12/2016 c1 eternaldestiny.deathsquad
can you change the School Nurse? can you change it to Hasegawa Chisato from The Testament of Sister New Devil.
oh and please add Mordred or Astolfo if you can, and maybe some loli or maybe legal loli, like Helena Blavatsky.
can you change the School Nurse? can you change it to Hasegawa Chisato from The Testament of Sister New Devil.
oh and please add Mordred or Astolfo if you can, and maybe some loli or maybe legal loli, like Helena Blavatsky.
5/10/2016 c1 3Venomancer
YES FUCKING YES PLEASE! THIS IS THE HOLY BIBLE BEING REWRITTEN! UPDATE PLEASE!
3VenomancerYES FUCKING YES PLEASE! THIS IS THE HOLY BIBLE BEING REWRITTEN! UPDATE PLEASE!
5/9/2016 c1 reydrago
wow a fate gamer letsee...GAH as long as the neotare isnt have
matou guys as the perpetrator(sp?) or that hedontistic priest i am fine...(zouken is an EW while shinji should just die)
wow a fate gamer letsee...GAH as long as the neotare isnt have
matou guys as the perpetrator(sp?) or that hedontistic priest i am fine...(zouken is an EW while shinji should just die)
5/8/2016 c1 wildman90
Please continue and I love the idea of Shirou/the main character being taken advantage by mature women. Will Taiga be the first to use shirou.
Please continue and I love the idea of Shirou/the main character being taken advantage by mature women. Will Taiga be the first to use shirou.
5/5/2016 c1 28EternalKing
If you know what fate grand order is then maybe medb and shishou will be added
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28EternalKingIf you know what fate grand order is then maybe medb and shishou will be added
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