
8/16/2024 c16 MonkeyMun
Overall Rating (as of now4/5
The pedophilia is very disturbing to me on this due to the simple fact that the MC is actually a child and he has intercourse on more than one occasion. But, the overall premise, idea, and execution were all really good until the part with pedophilia. I just hope the the story doesnt focus too much on the romance part but I’ll have to see and review again later.
Overall Rating (as of now4/5
The pedophilia is very disturbing to me on this due to the simple fact that the MC is actually a child and he has intercourse on more than one occasion. But, the overall premise, idea, and execution were all really good until the part with pedophilia. I just hope the the story doesnt focus too much on the romance part but I’ll have to see and review again later.
8/13/2024 c22 ThatLat
You know since this is a fanfic i will not be that harsh. But Shirou does not consider magi (magus) as people. to him if you decided to become a magus you are free to be killed by him and he doesnt have a moral dilemma about it. For the proof of it read Fate route day 9 to 12
You know since this is a fanfic i will not be that harsh. But Shirou does not consider magi (magus) as people. to him if you decided to become a magus you are free to be killed by him and he doesnt have a moral dilemma about it. For the proof of it read Fate route day 9 to 12
7/18/2024 c26 desropter
Fantastic fiction, but can you please explain the situation? It makes no sense that Shirou decided to spare Ryouko. From the get go it was obvious that an enemy Magus would be a danger to everyone around him and he still he did not act against her. Despite saying that he would kill anyone that is a threat to thouse close to him.
Fantastic fiction, but can you please explain the situation? It makes no sense that Shirou decided to spare Ryouko. From the get go it was obvious that an enemy Magus would be a danger to everyone around him and he still he did not act against her. Despite saying that he would kill anyone that is a threat to thouse close to him.
6/27/2024 c8 Guest
The problem of this story is that the Mc is 10. If he was at least 15, it would be much easier to stomach. As it is now? It only sends the message that the author is into shota sex.
I mean... to each their own?
The problem of this story is that the Mc is 10. If he was at least 15, it would be much easier to stomach. As it is now? It only sends the message that the author is into shota sex.
I mean... to each their own?
4/2/2024 c16 Uruguay Wolf
It's just... so peak
It's just... so peak
4/2/2024 c15 Uruguay Wolf
Getting cut in half ought to be hard to explain, even in the Moonlit World. Fortunately Matsumoto and co don't understand the Magi
Getting cut in half ought to be hard to explain, even in the Moonlit World. Fortunately Matsumoto and co don't understand the Magi
4/2/2024 c6 Uruguay Wolf
Lmaoooooo what a sick deviant, she gets her rocks off of making him squirm and wiggle. Damnit does this fic trigger my morbid interest
Lmaoooooo what a sick deviant, she gets her rocks off of making him squirm and wiggle. Damnit does this fic trigger my morbid interest
4/2/2024 c5 Uruguay Wolf
Despite the filthy subject matter, I'm pleased to see the characterization of Saeko here, it's just so... purple prose-y, lovin' it.
Despite the filthy subject matter, I'm pleased to see the characterization of Saeko here, it's just so... purple prose-y, lovin' it.
12/27/2023 c38
1Joe Lawyer
I'm not even a Fate/Stay Night fan and I read this whole damn story over the course of a few days. It is a really engaging story. There are definitely times when I want Shirou to make better decision or use his resources more efficiently, but never have I felt it was ridiculous or wanted to stop reading because of it.
I'm looking forward to more of this great fic!

I'm not even a Fate/Stay Night fan and I read this whole damn story over the course of a few days. It is a really engaging story. There are definitely times when I want Shirou to make better decision or use his resources more efficiently, but never have I felt it was ridiculous or wanted to stop reading because of it.
I'm looking forward to more of this great fic!
12/25/2023 c24 Joe Lawyer
I like these for profit missions, but unless he becomes insanely wealthy he needs to be smarter with his bargaining and appropriately valuing his resources. Otherwise he will always be lacking the resources he needs and putting himself in unneccesary danger.
I like these for profit missions, but unless he becomes insanely wealthy he needs to be smarter with his bargaining and appropriately valuing his resources. Otherwise he will always be lacking the resources he needs and putting himself in unneccesary danger.