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4/28/2020 c9 Tsukoblue
I hope chapter 10 will be out sometime
2/20/2020 c9 Gamma-X
Chapter 8 further proves my point that Koneko is interested in Naruto. So, I ask that she join Mittelt in forming a relationship with Naruto. She also needs love just like Mittelt since she's hurting because of her sister going 'crazy' and leaving her with the Gremorys where she was sentenced to death until Sirzechs pulled a few strings to get Rias a new Peerage Member. So, pretty pretty pretty pretty please with whipcream and a strawberry on top! Let her join the relationship~! ;-;
The things they would do to garner his attention.. as well as all the trouble it'll bring him! XD
He'll be hated even more by the boys of Kuoh and the girls might become more fanatical! Ooh joy~! :3
Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter! And I hope you respond to reviews cuz I'm curious about what your answer will be. Anyways...

Ja Ne~!
2/20/2020 c2 Gamma-X
Honestly... Why can't Naruto date *both* Mittelt *and* Koneko? They'd go great together! PLEASE LET IT HAPPEN! I know it's been more than a year, but I hope you come back. I'm really hoping Naruto can get Koneko as a girlfriend too because she's rivals with Mittelt. There's *also* the fact that in this chapter and Chapter 7, that she's clearly interested in Naruto. Naruto can very easily manage placing some time for both of them. Especially with Shadow Clones (although he has no need to if he's only got 2 girls). Koneko and Mittelt can not only become sisters this way, but also bet friends and take their rivalry to the grounds of trying to obtain more of Naruto's affections to themselves. Seriously... Am I the *only* one who thinks the three would be great together? It'd be hilarious! *And* make the story even better imo. I hope you change your mind. I'm glad there's at least *someone* who likes Mittelt other than me and is trying to show her love in fanfiction. Anyways, I hope you respond to this review~!
Please keep up the good work~! I love it! :D

Ja Ne~!
5/1/2019 c9 josue
ey deberias continuar el fanfic se esta volviendo realmente interesante
4/22/2019 c9 6Deltared52952
Not what I had in mind when I chose this but well written
2/12/2019 c9 Vercingetorix Rex
hahahaha my ribs! myribs! I can't really anymore!
Definitely one of the best Naruto x Dxd crossovers!
Naruto is a lot closer to the manga and i love the way he does pranks to Rias and her peerage!

continue with the good work
1/26/2019 c9 Cezar A FG
1/18/2019 c9 benjamin
me agrada este fanfic seria bueno las peleas de mittle y koneko por naruto y el papel de este al no ser par de rias o de sona continualo no lo olvides
1/1/2019 c3 Enoch4311
Had to stop after chapter 3 because you use one of my pet peeves as far as grammar errors are concerned. When writing dialog, you are supposed to make a separate paragraph each time another character begins speaking. It's a minor error but one I personally can bring myself to continue reading. Good idea though.
12/28/2018 c1 1Xero15
Hm summary looks promising
12/24/2018 c4 marquis.shax
ok so why exactly are you rushing Issei into giving up a part of himself to Ddraig there's really no need for it just yet an if Naruto is going to train him he might not even truly need to do that as I doubt to achieve balance breaker you have to give up your arm Issei only had to do so bc he was weak he'd never really trained much physically before which is why his devil magic was so low as well most likely
12/22/2018 c3 Guest
So I'm really confused and curious why Naruto is a good bit shorter than canon (He was one of the tallest people in the story by the epilogue) . Was there any real purpose for it? Is it some sort of projecting by the author (no offense but it's definitely possible)? Why not just keep canon height?
12/18/2018 c9 Dman101
This is very interesting but it’s not good to nerf Naruto like that. He could had defeated those the fallen angels with ease. Also I do wanna say but yur rushing through this, take it down a notch and have a more better conversation between everyone
12/18/2018 c9 Lazymanjones96
Interesting stuff looking forward to more
12/17/2018 c9 commandosquirrel
is it just mittelt or a harem
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