for Four rules5/4/2016 c1 
1USUKshippments
I'm looking forward to the updates on this fanfic. It seems interesting and i would love to see where you take it.
1USUKshippmentsI'm looking forward to the updates on this fanfic. It seems interesting and i would love to see where you take it.
4/24/2016 c1 6MadeInRomania
Loved it! 3
I liked the business approach, cold and detached, the little details about the mission that lead to... "But nowhere in the file was it mentioned making out with the target, in his office and on his desk." xD That cracked me up :))) There goes Arthur's professionalism! I enjoyed the internal struggled, I think it's just like him to be split between his duty and Alfred, to hesitate in such situations. And Alfred is just so oblivious to who 'Oliver' really is or why he's there! Perfect.
Aaaand, the kiss-almost-going-to-smut-but-not-there-yet. You know I have to mention it, right? So yeah, I loved it. I could really imagine what was going on and their feelings and sensations... and I was all giddy here. That's the fangirl in me.
Then the ending... I guess the agent is back. More or less. I still think Arthur will break more than those two rules and I must not be the only one around here hoping so.
Anyway, you got me hooked up. Again. I hope you keep updating 'cause it IS worth continuing.
6MadeInRomaniaLoved it! 3
I liked the business approach, cold and detached, the little details about the mission that lead to... "But nowhere in the file was it mentioned making out with the target, in his office and on his desk." xD That cracked me up :))) There goes Arthur's professionalism! I enjoyed the internal struggled, I think it's just like him to be split between his duty and Alfred, to hesitate in such situations. And Alfred is just so oblivious to who 'Oliver' really is or why he's there! Perfect.
Aaaand, the kiss-almost-going-to-smut-but-not-there-yet. You know I have to mention it, right? So yeah, I loved it. I could really imagine what was going on and their feelings and sensations... and I was all giddy here. That's the fangirl in me.
Then the ending... I guess the agent is back. More or less. I still think Arthur will break more than those two rules and I must not be the only one around here hoping so.
Anyway, you got me hooked up. Again. I hope you keep updating 'cause it IS worth continuing.
4/23/2016 c1 EverNightlands
Great first chapter! And I gotta agree with Arthur, how much I hate "Olliver" now! (for different reasons though... like the fangirl in me wanted Alfred to say "Arthur" ughhhh). PS: WHY do you always end it with cliffhanger? T_T
Great first chapter! And I gotta agree with Arthur, how much I hate "Olliver" now! (for different reasons though... like the fangirl in me wanted Alfred to say "Arthur" ughhhh). PS: WHY do you always end it with cliffhanger? T_T