for The Futile Facade7/18/2021 c9 we all matter
Rigel,,,,,, get som p
Rigel,,,,,, get som p
7/18/2021 c15 
14BlazeVein
Hello, I hope that you don't mind that I dare to translate your serie Rigel Black, into Spanish. I'm your fan and had a very happy moments reading it, so I l'd like to spread it. Please give me an answer - yes or no. I sent you a message the other day.
14BlazeVeinHello, I hope that you don't mind that I dare to translate your serie Rigel Black, into Spanish. I'm your fan and had a very happy moments reading it, so I l'd like to spread it. Please give me an answer - yes or no. I sent you a message the other day.
7/17/2021 c3 7Butter-bluetack
Please, please, please don't make the final pairing Harry/Leo! He unsettled me from the time he appeared. I had the feeling he wanted her to like him that way for a while. And the way he gets some of his subject's to keep tabs on her, and the influence Rispah says Harry has on him, and the flirting. It's creepy and weird!
However it's your fic and you can do whatever you want with it. I will continue reading bc I love this series too much to stop!
7Butter-bluetackPlease, please, please don't make the final pairing Harry/Leo! He unsettled me from the time he appeared. I had the feeling he wanted her to like him that way for a while. And the way he gets some of his subject's to keep tabs on her, and the influence Rispah says Harry has on him, and the flirting. It's creepy and weird!
However it's your fic and you can do whatever you want with it. I will continue reading bc I love this series too much to stop!
7/17/2021 c3 Guest
Leo is 18 while Harriet is (technically) 13/14, he has an entire squadron of orphans stalk her for the purposes of informing him of where she goes and who she meets, so that he can turn up at the drop of a hat to flirt and pry his way further into the private aspects of life.
I can't believe how extra Leo is in creeping on Harry, and nobody seems to give a damn about it. Even James' concern is played for laughs, putting him in the frame of an overbearing but ignorant parent figure. At least Caelum is damaged and in denial about his horrible behaviour, but Leo is just gross and proud of it.
Leo is 18 while Harriet is (technically) 13/14, he has an entire squadron of orphans stalk her for the purposes of informing him of where she goes and who she meets, so that he can turn up at the drop of a hat to flirt and pry his way further into the private aspects of life.
I can't believe how extra Leo is in creeping on Harry, and nobody seems to give a damn about it. Even James' concern is played for laughs, putting him in the frame of an overbearing but ignorant parent figure. At least Caelum is damaged and in denial about his horrible behaviour, but Leo is just gross and proud of it.
7/16/2021 c14 b
well, their parents are incompetents, she give them all the answers - polijuice modificated , contact after the tournament , she know too much about riddle, and toomuch about school, and the changing stuff between the 3 of them? , they are all morons and not the inventors thet suppossed to be.
well, their parents are incompetents, she give them all the answers - polijuice modificated , contact after the tournament , she know too much about riddle, and toomuch about school, and the changing stuff between the 3 of them? , they are all morons and not the inventors thet suppossed to be.
7/15/2021 c4 blaze
btw, in cannon Crouch Sr spoke a lot (150) of languages, and the tick-lip-thinguie in Barty Jr was invented by the actor for that role, also after what 13? years of imperius anyone would be insane me think, so this Barty should not be so mad, also very intelligent.
btw, in cannon Crouch Sr spoke a lot (150) of languages, and the tick-lip-thinguie in Barty Jr was invented by the actor for that role, also after what 13? years of imperius anyone would be insane me think, so this Barty should not be so mad, also very intelligent.
7/15/2021 c3 Guest
i really reaally hope that they will not be Harry-Leo pairing in this fic. I still dont like Leo, is too much a stalker and intruding and he wanna-know-all to my taste. and she is supposed to be just 13, I hope harry starting to think in spouse after her 30s heh im sounding like james, but not leo please. is like saying that harry only belongs with the low alleys and not with other people: is supporting that the purebloods think about muggleborns and halfbloods.
i really reaally hope that they will not be Harry-Leo pairing in this fic. I still dont like Leo, is too much a stalker and intruding and he wanna-know-all to my taste. and she is supposed to be just 13, I hope harry starting to think in spouse after her 30s heh im sounding like james, but not leo please. is like saying that harry only belongs with the low alleys and not with other people: is supporting that the purebloods think about muggleborns and halfbloods.
7/15/2021 c1 b
Leo is so pushy and nosy like he has a right or something to harry life,i dont like him , i hope you are not thinking of make him the love interest for harry.
Leo is so pushy and nosy like he has a right or something to harry life,i dont like him , i hope you are not thinking of make him the love interest for harry.
7/14/2021 c5 we all matter
Draco looked to the table, where upon laid not strawberry, but BLUEBERRY tarts. Top 10 anime betrayals, for sure 'n'
Draco looked to the table, where upon laid not strawberry, but BLUEBERRY tarts. Top 10 anime betrayals, for sure 'n'
7/12/2021 c1 Violet matters
All the very best to you as well, lovely author Violet! Thank you for sharing this phenomenally written masterpiece, it may or may not have become the bane of my very existence. I love you so much, please take care of yourself. toodles~
All the very best to you as well, lovely author Violet! Thank you for sharing this phenomenally written masterpiece, it may or may not have become the bane of my very existence. I love you so much, please take care of yourself. toodles~
7/11/2021 c15 Guest
Beyond amazing as always! I can’t wait to see you finish this incredible saga. Hands down the finest work of novel quality on this sight.
Beyond amazing as always! I can’t wait to see you finish this incredible saga. Hands down the finest work of novel quality on this sight.
7/11/2021 c13 AffinLaffin
What an amazing series this has been, and what an emotional and high-stakes pay off!
I did notice a slightly repeat in the formula though: Each story in the series seems to have critical moments that depend very heavily on Harry/Rigel (and occasionally others) being trapped behind some sort of barrier that the people on the outside trying to bring aid and rescue cannot take down, and usually requiring someone on the inside to do it for them.
Each time is quite a different circumstance, and while Futile Facade has been top notch overall after the variation of it in The Ambiguous Artifice there's only going to be diminishing returns. I think it might be a bit played out. Sorry if that's intentional, or if others have already pointed it out. It just stood out quite a bit to me, and I thought it might be worth mentioning just in case.
What an amazing series this has been, and what an emotional and high-stakes pay off!
I did notice a slightly repeat in the formula though: Each story in the series seems to have critical moments that depend very heavily on Harry/Rigel (and occasionally others) being trapped behind some sort of barrier that the people on the outside trying to bring aid and rescue cannot take down, and usually requiring someone on the inside to do it for them.
Each time is quite a different circumstance, and while Futile Facade has been top notch overall after the variation of it in The Ambiguous Artifice there's only going to be diminishing returns. I think it might be a bit played out. Sorry if that's intentional, or if others have already pointed it out. It just stood out quite a bit to me, and I thought it might be worth mentioning just in case.
7/8/2021 c14 3Completely Confunded
Leo! Carpal Tunnel forbids me writing much but I live Leo and Harry's relationship!
3Completely ConfundedLeo! Carpal Tunnel forbids me writing much but I live Leo and Harry's relationship!