for Halimeda Potter, Thinking of the Sea6/5/2016 c5 
23Remzal Von Enili
Tony's Ironman mask have a opening feature? Couldn't he just flash her (his face)? Or is he just too frazzled to remember that?
Secondary question. Tony's suit has like 8 different types of vision including thermal vision a NB D it has heartbeat sensors. How the hell did he miss creepy demon horses?
23Remzal Von EniliTony's Ironman mask have a opening feature? Couldn't he just flash her (his face)? Or is he just too frazzled to remember that?
Secondary question. Tony's suit has like 8 different types of vision including thermal vision a NB D it has heartbeat sensors. How the hell did he miss creepy demon horses?
6/5/2016 c5 7hannah.kaho
She could be with Logan, unless you wont be crossing it with x-men as well, cause he's basically immortal as well.
7hannah.kahoShe could be with Logan, unless you wont be crossing it with x-men as well, cause he's basically immortal as well.
6/5/2016 c5 9Morgan d'Arc
Its funny because Tony's first suit didn't have the automatic disassemble thing so he cant prove hes not a robot lol.
9Morgan d'ArcIts funny because Tony's first suit didn't have the automatic disassemble thing so he cant prove hes not a robot lol.
6/3/2016 c4 Guest
hello again I may know you ... ehem mermicorns...kittens...badlands...auntie unta... ehem.. realy good!
hello again I may know you ... ehem mermicorns...kittens...badlands...auntie unta... ehem.. realy good!
6/3/2016 c1 Guest
um... I may or may not know you. hem mermicorns... a grate chapter!
um... I may or may not know you. hem mermicorns... a grate chapter!
5/26/2016 c4 2TripleCough
I really enjoy your story so far! There are several spelling/grammer errors in each of your chapters, but they're insignificant enough that I could ignore it. Regardless, it would be awesome if you could look over your chapters and fix them! Thanks.
2TripleCoughI really enjoy your story so far! There are several spelling/grammer errors in each of your chapters, but they're insignificant enough that I could ignore it. Regardless, it would be awesome if you could look over your chapters and fix them! Thanks.
5/25/2016 c4 R.B Uzumaki
OK I have to ask ARE YOU MAKING A DEADPOOL STORY this really looks like a deadpool story.
OK I have to ask ARE YOU MAKING A DEADPOOL STORY this really looks like a deadpool story.
5/25/2016 c4 athenakitty
Makes me curious if Hallie's going to get around and check to see if there's an actual curse on her family's name. Just how overprotective is everyone?
Makes me curious if Hallie's going to get around and check to see if there's an actual curse on her family's name. Just how overprotective is everyone?
5/24/2016 c4 4candinaru25
well that has got to be something for them to see her dying all the time. and i wonder who will get to her first tony or her family
4candinaru25well that has got to be something for them to see her dying all the time. and i wonder who will get to her first tony or her family