for Halimeda Potter, Thinking of the Sea12/12/2018 c8 Guest
Stupid ending
Stupid ending
9/9/2018 c6 etbagel2122
omfg im rereading this in the first time in ages and im realizing that adult wizards and witches in the mundane world is like 'the unbreakable kimmy schmidt' series on netflix but in hp form! PPPFFFTTTTTT
omfg im rereading this in the first time in ages and im realizing that adult wizards and witches in the mundane world is like 'the unbreakable kimmy schmidt' series on netflix but in hp form! PPPFFFTTTTTT
8/11/2018 c8 
16SilentSnowLeopardNinja
I was interested in this story then I was enjoying it then I was exasperated and now...now I don't think I like it. The ridiculous level escalated to the point of irritation and confusion without any enjoyment. Which due to the lack of a chapter update wasn't helped as explanations are not given on how why when and HOW Draco Bloody Malfoy of all people has appeared and successfully pulled a stunt like this. There was no hints leading up to it. Any reason for this is lost as he shouldn't even have a reason or the means to go after Hali in the 2nd place. And I absolutely REFUSE to believe a whiny chump like Draco could out smart AND out maneuver a big ass building full of intelligent, shrewd, fast, nimble killers and spies. Let alone the spy of spy of spies whilst being in a different world even more technologically advanced than his. An ignorant self involved pureblood of his calibre is more likely to get maimed trying to figure out how to cross the street (let alone get caught doing anything) than successfully infiltrate a mall or a candy store. Nevermind one of S.H.I.E.L.D's headquarters. I don't care who he has with him if they're from the other world too they should be just as ignorant and incapable.
16SilentSnowLeopardNinjaI was interested in this story then I was enjoying it then I was exasperated and now...now I don't think I like it. The ridiculous level escalated to the point of irritation and confusion without any enjoyment. Which due to the lack of a chapter update wasn't helped as explanations are not given on how why when and HOW Draco Bloody Malfoy of all people has appeared and successfully pulled a stunt like this. There was no hints leading up to it. Any reason for this is lost as he shouldn't even have a reason or the means to go after Hali in the 2nd place. And I absolutely REFUSE to believe a whiny chump like Draco could out smart AND out maneuver a big ass building full of intelligent, shrewd, fast, nimble killers and spies. Let alone the spy of spy of spies whilst being in a different world even more technologically advanced than his. An ignorant self involved pureblood of his calibre is more likely to get maimed trying to figure out how to cross the street (let alone get caught doing anything) than successfully infiltrate a mall or a candy store. Nevermind one of S.H.I.E.L.D's headquarters. I don't care who he has with him if they're from the other world too they should be just as ignorant and incapable.
8/11/2018 c7 SilentSnowLeopardNinja
Why the actual fuck is there someone from her world(likely Tom) here? What is this shittery?!
Why the actual fuck is there someone from her world(likely Tom) here? What is this shittery?!
8/11/2018 c6 SilentSnowLeopardNinja
I don't understand Hali's stupidity. Not once has she asked the strange robot man she just met if he was taking her home, where he was taking her, how did he know about her being kidnapped, and why were they flying on a plane as well as where are they flying to. On top of that she never told him her family's names or where they were when she was kidnapped or her address to be taken home. She's technically about 25 years old or so. How does none of this even cross her mind? And to make it more baffling despite Tony having his computer look her up (which lily would have made sure she had papers PLUS he should have found something since a muggle police report was made about her kidnapping which further means she does) he didn't ask the little girl if she knew a phone number to reach her family, if she knew her home address, a friend address, and didn't even bother trying to contact the police. No instead he purposely re-kidnaps a kidnapped child in/from another country with no care for consequences. What the actual hell? Tony is more aware of shit than this.
I don't understand Hali's stupidity. Not once has she asked the strange robot man she just met if he was taking her home, where he was taking her, how did he know about her being kidnapped, and why were they flying on a plane as well as where are they flying to. On top of that she never told him her family's names or where they were when she was kidnapped or her address to be taken home. She's technically about 25 years old or so. How does none of this even cross her mind? And to make it more baffling despite Tony having his computer look her up (which lily would have made sure she had papers PLUS he should have found something since a muggle police report was made about her kidnapping which further means she does) he didn't ask the little girl if she knew a phone number to reach her family, if she knew her home address, a friend address, and didn't even bother trying to contact the police. No instead he purposely re-kidnaps a kidnapped child in/from another country with no care for consequences. What the actual hell? Tony is more aware of shit than this.
6/3/2018 c8 cruciosirius
Oh god, this is one of my favorites fanfictions now, I'm so glad I found it. I wish there was more to read 'cause I absolutely love this story. Please update soon
PS: Loki is Fake!Fury isn't? though I have no idea how he ended up working with Malfoy
Oh god, this is one of my favorites fanfictions now, I'm so glad I found it. I wish there was more to read 'cause I absolutely love this story. Please update soon
PS: Loki is Fake!Fury isn't? though I have no idea how he ended up working with Malfoy
5/2/2018 c8 Guest
WRITE MORE PLEASE!
WRITE MORE PLEASE!
2/16/2018 c8 BobTheT-rex
When is Harry going to go nuts with master of death craziness
When is Harry going to go nuts with master of death craziness
2/15/2018 c2 BobTheT-rex
*slow clap* for James
*slow clap* for James
12/9/2017 c8 Guest
Please update. Your story is amazing.
Please update. Your story is amazing.