
5/21/2019 c15 twilightfanficreader164
I rate this 10/10! This is amazing! I know it has been about 2 years, but please update soon!
I rate this 10/10! This is amazing! I know it has been about 2 years, but please update soon!
7/18/2017 c14 Guest
I'm really enjoying this so far! Update soon please!
I'm really enjoying this so far! Update soon please!
7/17/2017 c14 Guest
please keep writing!
please keep writing!
7/6/2017 c14 Guest
Don't stop writing this story please!
Don't stop writing this story please!
3/13/2017 c14 CandyCorn
I got so excited when I realized you'd done another chapter! Keep it up, They're great! :)
I got so excited when I realized you'd done another chapter! Keep it up, They're great! :)
1/13/2017 c1 Guest
This is awesome :) Love reading it. It's like reading the real book (though it has some grammar/ typo problems), and you should definitely keep it going! I can't wait for the next part!
Also- does anyone know how you're supposed to pronounce Laia?
This is awesome :) Love reading it. It's like reading the real book (though it has some grammar/ typo problems), and you should definitely keep it going! I can't wait for the next part!
Also- does anyone know how you're supposed to pronounce Laia?
1/10/2017 c13 Guest
PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! ITS SO GOOD!
PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! ITS SO GOOD!
11/25/2016 c12 Guest
In desperate need to of an update!
In desperate need to of an update!
11/17/2016 c12 Guest
I love these two! Please keep updating, it's so good!
I love these two! Please keep updating, it's so good!
11/15/2016 c12 Guest
Please update! I would greatly appreciate it!
Please update! I would greatly appreciate it!
11/3/2016 c12 sairah kamal
It's so good! please continue!
It's so good! please continue!
11/2/2016 c12 Guest
You are such a talented writer. Keep going!
You are such a talented writer. Keep going!
10/29/2016 c12 Guest
Moooooorrrrrrreeeeeee please!
Moooooorrrrrrreeeeeee please!
10/24/2016 c10 Guest
I love your writing, but how do chapters 10 and 12 fit together? I love both scenes, I'm just confused! Please update!
I love your writing, but how do chapters 10 and 12 fit together? I love both scenes, I'm just confused! Please update!