
3/28/2021 c10 diah77
Au-chan, are you not gonna continue this fic? why oh why? it's a good one you know, i like it, eventhough there is an ichihime (i don't like them, sorrybut still i like this story.. Perhaps you are lost interest to the story because of the ending of the manga? I hate it too, but please continue your story, so we can see IchiRuki still sailing
Au-chan, are you not gonna continue this fic? why oh why? it's a good one you know, i like it, eventhough there is an ichihime (i don't like them, sorrybut still i like this story.. Perhaps you are lost interest to the story because of the ending of the manga? I hate it too, but please continue your story, so we can see IchiRuki still sailing
4/13/2017 c10 Bleach power
Just asking but will there be a new chapter anytime soon.
Just asking but will there be a new chapter anytime soon.
7/21/2016 c10 gin
I have up on the manga long time ago. The SS arc will remain the best, even the musical bleach group in Japan ships ichiruki! what the fuck kubo?!
Anyways, your story is better than what kubo has been dragging on all these previous years.
I have up on the manga long time ago. The SS arc will remain the best, even the musical bleach group in Japan ships ichiruki! what the fuck kubo?!
Anyways, your story is better than what kubo has been dragging on all these previous years.
7/21/2016 c10
3NieveDrop
I once again agree with Shirayuki99 about 682. It was thankfulness Rukia and Renji were now speaking and working as a team. Their friendship was completely decimated, but Ichigo helped mend that for them. I think it would have been different if Rukia had been saying it, but it was Renji. Also, Rukia needs her moment. Kisuke said "Kuchiki" not "Abarai," and I highly doubt he meant Byakins. Don't give up hope until it's over...and then, hope for at the minimum ambiguity so you can keep hoping. ;)
It's going much better. In the beginning you were racing past a lot. You've hit a good balance now. You don't have to introduce every character and every bit of minutiae, but we need enough to understand the setting and the ideologies. It's much meatier now in developing relationships outside of Ichigo and Rukia.
Has Tatsuki been seeing Grimmjow's little shows of affection as much is Ichigo has been attuned to them?
This was a nice treatment of Byakins's introduction but Rukia's maintained loyalty and affection to Ukitake.

I once again agree with Shirayuki99 about 682. It was thankfulness Rukia and Renji were now speaking and working as a team. Their friendship was completely decimated, but Ichigo helped mend that for them. I think it would have been different if Rukia had been saying it, but it was Renji. Also, Rukia needs her moment. Kisuke said "Kuchiki" not "Abarai," and I highly doubt he meant Byakins. Don't give up hope until it's over...and then, hope for at the minimum ambiguity so you can keep hoping. ;)
It's going much better. In the beginning you were racing past a lot. You've hit a good balance now. You don't have to introduce every character and every bit of minutiae, but we need enough to understand the setting and the ideologies. It's much meatier now in developing relationships outside of Ichigo and Rukia.
Has Tatsuki been seeing Grimmjow's little shows of affection as much is Ichigo has been attuned to them?
This was a nice treatment of Byakins's introduction but Rukia's maintained loyalty and affection to Ukitake.
7/21/2016 c9 gin
the back stories broke my heart... and now I know why rukia has that royal aura... she is the missing princess! well done with the story plot!
the back stories broke my heart... and now I know why rukia has that royal aura... she is the missing princess! well done with the story plot!
7/21/2016 c8 gin
holy shit! masaki's alive and I bet you gave ichi a little brother too!
holy shit! masaki's alive and I bet you gave ichi a little brother too!
7/21/2016 c7 gin
omg! rukia! what?! I bet renji and grimm aren't aware of what she's up to xD
omg! rukia! what?! I bet renji and grimm aren't aware of what she's up to xD
7/21/2016 c6 gin
so renji suspects that rukia loves strawberry... and the idiot doesn't realise that and is with other girl. but grimm loves rukia but is with tatsuki! lolol this is too complicated!
so renji suspects that rukia loves strawberry... and the idiot doesn't realise that and is with other girl. but grimm loves rukia but is with tatsuki! lolol this is too complicated!
7/21/2016 c5 gin
woah! what an intense chapter!
woah! what an intense chapter!
7/21/2016 c4 gin
ugh... please get over with ichihime dammit! start ichiruki already!
ugh... please get over with ichihime dammit! start ichiruki already!
7/21/2016 c3 gin
I thought this was a ichiruki story not a freaking ichihime! *shudders*
I thought this was a ichiruki story not a freaking ichihime! *shudders*
7/21/2016 c2 gin
damn it ichigo! if he only heard his friends' reasoning.
damn it ichigo! if he only heard his friends' reasoning.
7/21/2016 c1 gin
well, this is interesting... hopefully you'll avoid full on tragedy and add a happy ending. please?
well, this is interesting... hopefully you'll avoid full on tragedy and add a happy ending. please?
7/20/2016 c10 Guest
Don't kill hisana off, please.
Don't kill hisana off, please.