
7/20/2016 c10 Guest
Don't kill hisana off, please.
Don't kill hisana off, please.
7/20/2016 c10 reesen555
the chapter was good but about the manga chapters , from where did you get renruki ? Renji said something we knew all helped to reconcile Renji and Rukia's broken friendship and nothing more.I think your mind is filled up with nonexistent things after hearing ichiori fans' crazy interpretation. You need to understand the context of every moment in bleach rather than jumping in random conclusion. Renji and Rukia has a "familial friendship" which was broken when rukia was adopted but ichigo was the one to fix their broken friendship. That's all!
the chapter was good but about the manga chapters , from where did you get renruki ? Renji said something we knew all helped to reconcile Renji and Rukia's broken friendship and nothing more.I think your mind is filled up with nonexistent things after hearing ichiori fans' crazy interpretation. You need to understand the context of every moment in bleach rather than jumping in random conclusion. Renji and Rukia has a "familial friendship" which was broken when rukia was adopted but ichigo was the one to fix their broken friendship. That's all!
7/20/2016 c10 Shirayuki992
I would like to review first but I think I need to share my opinion about chapter 682. First, it doesn't hinted Renruki, Renji was merely thanking Ichigo for because of him, he and Rukia have rebuild their bond. The moment was an Ichiren moment, after Renji told Ichigo about the drifting bond he shared with Rukia, Kubo focused more on how grateful Renji was to Ichigo and he's determined to help Ichigo as much as he could. Their conversation steered that way coz Ichigo asked Renji if it's okay for him to tag along. Ichigo was really concerned about Renji's condition (doesn't he realized he's more beaten up than Renji? XD) but ofc Renji being one of Ichigo's irreplacable nakama, let Ichigo knew that he'll see it through till the end. The moment was actually so bromantic xD And there's no even hint of Renruki being canon, LOL! That moment, maybe, was a sign that if ever Ichigo would pursue Rukia, will definitely supports them. And didn't you notice that most nakamas of Ichigo had already their moments with him? Chad, Uryuu, then Inoue was able to fight alongside with him and then there's Renji's moment with Ichigo. So who's the person who have to have their moment with Ichigo yet? Ofc we knew who them is. Kubo's just saving the best for last. Don't mind the detractors, their just merely twisting that moment so it would seem to look like Ichigo's approving Renruki. Coz again, that moment was not focusing about Renji and Rukia, it was Renji and Ichigo. So I hope you won't be depress coz our ship is still sailing. And Ichihime is still a far-fetched reality. It's either Ichiruki or Ichigo would end up alone in SS with Ruka, so technically IchiRuki! XD
So for the review, I really like this chapter, so many happenings and thank god you didn't drag the revelation moment! I was somehow hoping for an IR fluff but I still enjoyed Ichigo's jealousy xD
And yes everything was clear to me now and I'm so looking forward with that IR lime!
Looking forward for an update and cheer up! Btw, we have this group in FB called Ichiruki One True Pairing. The group is awesome, and everything about IR is there. We even have discussions of every chapter, IH's posts-more like make fun of their theories xD- and anything related to our ship. So I think it's one of the best place to express your feelings about Bleach. You are so welcome to join!
I would like to review first but I think I need to share my opinion about chapter 682. First, it doesn't hinted Renruki, Renji was merely thanking Ichigo for because of him, he and Rukia have rebuild their bond. The moment was an Ichiren moment, after Renji told Ichigo about the drifting bond he shared with Rukia, Kubo focused more on how grateful Renji was to Ichigo and he's determined to help Ichigo as much as he could. Their conversation steered that way coz Ichigo asked Renji if it's okay for him to tag along. Ichigo was really concerned about Renji's condition (doesn't he realized he's more beaten up than Renji? XD) but ofc Renji being one of Ichigo's irreplacable nakama, let Ichigo knew that he'll see it through till the end. The moment was actually so bromantic xD And there's no even hint of Renruki being canon, LOL! That moment, maybe, was a sign that if ever Ichigo would pursue Rukia, will definitely supports them. And didn't you notice that most nakamas of Ichigo had already their moments with him? Chad, Uryuu, then Inoue was able to fight alongside with him and then there's Renji's moment with Ichigo. So who's the person who have to have their moment with Ichigo yet? Ofc we knew who them is. Kubo's just saving the best for last. Don't mind the detractors, their just merely twisting that moment so it would seem to look like Ichigo's approving Renruki. Coz again, that moment was not focusing about Renji and Rukia, it was Renji and Ichigo. So I hope you won't be depress coz our ship is still sailing. And Ichihime is still a far-fetched reality. It's either Ichiruki or Ichigo would end up alone in SS with Ruka, so technically IchiRuki! XD
So for the review, I really like this chapter, so many happenings and thank god you didn't drag the revelation moment! I was somehow hoping for an IR fluff but I still enjoyed Ichigo's jealousy xD
And yes everything was clear to me now and I'm so looking forward with that IR lime!
Looking forward for an update and cheer up! Btw, we have this group in FB called Ichiruki One True Pairing. The group is awesome, and everything about IR is there. We even have discussions of every chapter, IH's posts-more like make fun of their theories xD- and anything related to our ship. So I think it's one of the best place to express your feelings about Bleach. You are so welcome to join!
7/20/2016 c10 blissbeat
I'm really good right...hehe...about manga spoiler...really? Renruki? Oh no please don't let ichigo be with orihime...it will really break my heart...if ichigo really end up with orihime in manga then I just act ignorant & imagine my own happy ending where ichigo with rukia in the end... TT
I'm really good right...hehe...about manga spoiler...really? Renruki? Oh no please don't let ichigo be with orihime...it will really break my heart...if ichigo really end up with orihime in manga then I just act ignorant & imagine my own happy ending where ichigo with rukia in the end... TT
7/1/2016 c9 hopelessromantic
Vakla! Nagbalik ka na! I'm so happy! Please let Ichigo suffer more of that jealousy. Lol. He deserves that after hooking up with Inoue. Eeww. I mean, you just broke up with Inoue but now you're suddenly feeling territorial of Rukia? Ichigo has no right lol. Let him see how Rukia's life does not revolve around him. hahahaha
Vakla! Nagbalik ka na! I'm so happy! Please let Ichigo suffer more of that jealousy. Lol. He deserves that after hooking up with Inoue. Eeww. I mean, you just broke up with Inoue but now you're suddenly feeling territorial of Rukia? Ichigo has no right lol. Let him see how Rukia's life does not revolve around him. hahahaha
6/30/2016 c9 Guest
Yay an update! This chapter was intense and emotional and informative... So juicy... Full of stuffs! So Rukia might be the lost princess and I'm so intruiged how come she'll be their 'greatest weapon' in the war...
I like the grimmruki fluff! Poor Grimm :'(
Loving the jealous Ichigo in this chapter :p
The story is on its peak and I can't wait for the upcoming events! Looking forward for an update soon and an IR fluff plus a lil' bit limey? XD
Maybe, making jealous Ichigo confronting Rukia about her relationship with Grimm then the confrontation turns into ... You know the next xD
Welcome back by the way!
Yay an update! This chapter was intense and emotional and informative... So juicy... Full of stuffs! So Rukia might be the lost princess and I'm so intruiged how come she'll be their 'greatest weapon' in the war...
I like the grimmruki fluff! Poor Grimm :'(
Loving the jealous Ichigo in this chapter :p
The story is on its peak and I can't wait for the upcoming events! Looking forward for an update soon and an IR fluff plus a lil' bit limey? XD
Maybe, making jealous Ichigo confronting Rukia about her relationship with Grimm then the confrontation turns into ... You know the next xD
Welcome back by the way!
6/30/2016 c9 Kejora
can not wait to next chapter when Rukia will reveal as a kidnapped princess :)
can not wait to next chapter when Rukia will reveal as a kidnapped princess :)
6/30/2016 c9 Guest
Either Jushiro was the person sent to kill the princess or he was the one given the princess to protect, and I'm guessing someone in the room has a super sekrit identity! ;) If it wasn't him sent with the task, I will be curious to learn who that was and if they failed in their mission by choice or by outside prevention. Do all of them, meaning the adults in the room, know who she is or just Jushiro? While others' attitudes may change toward her, I don't see the revelation changing who she is, other than making her that much more determined in her mission to save everyone.
It was nice to get some back story about more characters and the reason they are fighting. Although I am very concerned about the quadrilateral relationship that's going on. Who will be the one to inadvertently betray them when someone doesn't get the significant other's affection they want? Dun dun dun.
There were quite a few verb form mistakes throughout the chapter. You either left off past tense endings of "d" and "ed" or used "had" and "has" improperly. Just watch for that when you review.
Either Jushiro was the person sent to kill the princess or he was the one given the princess to protect, and I'm guessing someone in the room has a super sekrit identity! ;) If it wasn't him sent with the task, I will be curious to learn who that was and if they failed in their mission by choice or by outside prevention. Do all of them, meaning the adults in the room, know who she is or just Jushiro? While others' attitudes may change toward her, I don't see the revelation changing who she is, other than making her that much more determined in her mission to save everyone.
It was nice to get some back story about more characters and the reason they are fighting. Although I am very concerned about the quadrilateral relationship that's going on. Who will be the one to inadvertently betray them when someone doesn't get the significant other's affection they want? Dun dun dun.
There were quite a few verb form mistakes throughout the chapter. You either left off past tense endings of "d" and "ed" or used "had" and "has" improperly. Just watch for that when you review.
6/30/2016 c9 ffn1990
Thank you for returning to this story! It's one of the best on here, and it's unique in its concept. If you ever need ichiruki fic inspiration, come to me for recommendatioms because I am desperate to see you complete this great story. Thank you for updating!
Thank you for returning to this story! It's one of the best on here, and it's unique in its concept. If you ever need ichiruki fic inspiration, come to me for recommendatioms because I am desperate to see you complete this great story. Thank you for updating!
6/30/2016 c9 blissbeat
I knew the weapon they were talking about is rukia as a princess right... Only rukia can stop the war by revealing herself to the emperor & told everything that Aizen did to the emperor. I'm predicted the emperor was byakuya & the empress was hisana... That's why all of them kept calling rukia princess...
If you ask me, I actually crying while reading about grimmijow father's & rangiku torture... & the way rukia trying to calm grimmijow was so sweet..love it...
Can't wait for the fluffy moment in next chapter
I knew the weapon they were talking about is rukia as a princess right... Only rukia can stop the war by revealing herself to the emperor & told everything that Aizen did to the emperor. I'm predicted the emperor was byakuya & the empress was hisana... That's why all of them kept calling rukia princess...
If you ask me, I actually crying while reading about grimmijow father's & rangiku torture... & the way rukia trying to calm grimmijow was so sweet..love it...
Can't wait for the fluffy moment in next chapter
5/19/2016 c8 Guest
damn masaki still alive. ichigo should be convinced enough, about time. More on the ichiXrukiXgrim deal please, their my favourite trio!
damn masaki still alive. ichigo should be convinced enough, about time. More on the ichiXrukiXgrim deal please, their my favourite trio!
5/18/2016 c8 blissbeat
Interesting... I think the boy with orange hair might be ichigo's brother since his mother was alive all this time... Can't wait to know more about their secret...
Interesting... I think the boy with orange hair might be ichigo's brother since his mother was alive all this time... Can't wait to know more about their secret...
5/18/2016 c8 Guest
YESSS! An update! Goodness gracious! So far this chapter is my most favorite! I really thought you wouldn't make Ichigo goes "touchy-feely" with Rukia. I was just expecting a jealous strawberry but I got more! The downside of reading this chapter at 2 in the morning was I have to prevent myself from squealing loudly while reading the fluffy with a dash of lime scene xD I'm gald tho that I stayed up late for I can't wait any longer to read this chapie!
Anyway, I had an inkling that Masaki is might alive... And there you have it , she's alive! I wonder what really happened... Is really the lefters the true enemy of the people or the government? Is Aizen will be here in the story? Why were there orange-haired kids in the camp or did I just read it wrong and I was hallucinating? Reading it made me think that Masaki was turned like a Queen bee, you know!? XD
On the other hand, I liked how you used popular Filipino names for animals in your story! I forgot to mention it in my review earlier. Well , just a suggestion, you could have put after the story an explanation for the strange names... Tho it's unnecessary... But it is up to you.
Going back with the ichirukihime thingy, I really hope Inoue would back down, she'll just hurt herself more. There's no help it! Ichigo is already wrapped in Rukia's sexy finger XD she's not even putting an effort how much more if she will? I am enjoying too the harem Rukia have. A jealous strawberry is amusing and served him right for giving in to Inoue... JUST KIDDING! I know it was normal for them to have sex coz they're in a relationship... Pardon me for still being butthurt about it :3 And I totally agree with you that Ichigo would have a hard time in getting Rukia! :P
Okay, I'll stop now... I'm hoping that you'll not seriously giving us an update after a month... :( please update soon bb. Author :)))
-Shirayuki992 (tamad lng tlga akong mag log-in xD)
YESSS! An update! Goodness gracious! So far this chapter is my most favorite! I really thought you wouldn't make Ichigo goes "touchy-feely" with Rukia. I was just expecting a jealous strawberry but I got more! The downside of reading this chapter at 2 in the morning was I have to prevent myself from squealing loudly while reading the fluffy with a dash of lime scene xD I'm gald tho that I stayed up late for I can't wait any longer to read this chapie!
Anyway, I had an inkling that Masaki is might alive... And there you have it , she's alive! I wonder what really happened... Is really the lefters the true enemy of the people or the government? Is Aizen will be here in the story? Why were there orange-haired kids in the camp or did I just read it wrong and I was hallucinating? Reading it made me think that Masaki was turned like a Queen bee, you know!? XD
On the other hand, I liked how you used popular Filipino names for animals in your story! I forgot to mention it in my review earlier. Well , just a suggestion, you could have put after the story an explanation for the strange names... Tho it's unnecessary... But it is up to you.
Going back with the ichirukihime thingy, I really hope Inoue would back down, she'll just hurt herself more. There's no help it! Ichigo is already wrapped in Rukia's sexy finger XD she's not even putting an effort how much more if she will? I am enjoying too the harem Rukia have. A jealous strawberry is amusing and served him right for giving in to Inoue... JUST KIDDING! I know it was normal for them to have sex coz they're in a relationship... Pardon me for still being butthurt about it :3 And I totally agree with you that Ichigo would have a hard time in getting Rukia! :P
Okay, I'll stop now... I'm hoping that you'll not seriously giving us an update after a month... :( please update soon bb. Author :)))
-Shirayuki992 (tamad lng tlga akong mag log-in xD)
5/18/2016 c8 hopelessromantic
yes, i'm quite content. but i wouldn't mind more! seeing ichigo jealous is so good! uuwi ka pala. safe journey to you!
yes, i'm quite content. but i wouldn't mind more! seeing ichigo jealous is so good! uuwi ka pala. safe journey to you!
5/18/2016 c8
3H.S Wallace
New it. His moms alive. What the fuck man. You build a character around his moms death then you suddenly pop it that his moms alive seriously what the fuck is wrong with you I'm waiting for the next chapter. But still what the fuck dude

New it. His moms alive. What the fuck man. You build a character around his moms death then you suddenly pop it that his moms alive seriously what the fuck is wrong with you I'm waiting for the next chapter. But still what the fuck dude