
5/18/2016 c8
3NieveDrop
I do have some concern with Orihime. Unlike Grimmjow who knows Rukia's heart is elsewhere and will take what he can get of Rukia's attention regardless of not owning her heart, Orihime seems convinced she can change Ichigo's heart. Her assessment of Ichigo and Rukia is one of admiration not love or attraction. When she learns that Ichigo will never return affection for her again (as that appears to be the case from your A/N), I imagine her actions could be against the interest of her friends...even if inadvertent.
Hmm...I think it's going to be a leeeeeeettle difficult to convince Ichigo he needs to stay hell bent on his vengeance route now. LOL
I'm also guessing Ukitake calls Rukia "princess" for a reason beyond it being a cute nickname for her, especially with some recent references to the palace. ;)

I do have some concern with Orihime. Unlike Grimmjow who knows Rukia's heart is elsewhere and will take what he can get of Rukia's attention regardless of not owning her heart, Orihime seems convinced she can change Ichigo's heart. Her assessment of Ichigo and Rukia is one of admiration not love or attraction. When she learns that Ichigo will never return affection for her again (as that appears to be the case from your A/N), I imagine her actions could be against the interest of her friends...even if inadvertent.
Hmm...I think it's going to be a leeeeeeettle difficult to convince Ichigo he needs to stay hell bent on his vengeance route now. LOL
I'm also guessing Ukitake calls Rukia "princess" for a reason beyond it being a cute nickname for her, especially with some recent references to the palace. ;)
5/18/2016 c8 Sayuri
It was great ! Thanks ! Finally a little romance between Rukia and Ichigo even if it was only a huge, it does you good !
Ahh Ichigo always too protective with Rukia, it makes me smile ! The idea was fabulous and I like also the fact that Karin tries to look imitate Rukia. I love these girls so much ahaha.
The reunion of the whole group was quick but great. I feel bad for Grimmjow, poor guy ! I hope he will overcome his pain and keep a good relationship with Rukia (as a brother/friend) ! Could you next time try to write a little bit more about the relation between Ichigo-Grim-Renji ? (I don't force you, it's your fanfic so do as you wish but I would like to know if they are keeping the same "brotherhood" than before)
AHAH I knew it ! I knew Masaki was still alive ! I crave for explanation for the next chapter !
finally my exams are over and it's the holidays ! I readed that you are back to your home country ! Philippines ! Whaouh that's amazing ! Enjoy ! I will show patience and I will wait your new chapter !
It was great ! Thanks ! Finally a little romance between Rukia and Ichigo even if it was only a huge, it does you good !
Ahh Ichigo always too protective with Rukia, it makes me smile ! The idea was fabulous and I like also the fact that Karin tries to look imitate Rukia. I love these girls so much ahaha.
The reunion of the whole group was quick but great. I feel bad for Grimmjow, poor guy ! I hope he will overcome his pain and keep a good relationship with Rukia (as a brother/friend) ! Could you next time try to write a little bit more about the relation between Ichigo-Grim-Renji ? (I don't force you, it's your fanfic so do as you wish but I would like to know if they are keeping the same "brotherhood" than before)
AHAH I knew it ! I knew Masaki was still alive ! I crave for explanation for the next chapter !
finally my exams are over and it's the holidays ! I readed that you are back to your home country ! Philippines ! Whaouh that's amazing ! Enjoy ! I will show patience and I will wait your new chapter !
5/18/2016 c8 Kejora
Can not wait for next chapter I am so happy that your updating is on scheduled. So I thank you very much. Make my day very happy :). But can I have a request to you cos I like Rukia very much so when we can have Rukia's POV? Rukia's love with Kaien? cos Ichi with orihime first:P
Can not wait for next chapter I am so happy that your updating is on scheduled. So I thank you very much. Make my day very happy :). But can I have a request to you cos I like Rukia very much so when we can have Rukia's POV? Rukia's love with Kaien? cos Ichi with orihime first:P
5/17/2016 c7 Guest
Your story is simply amazing! You started it simple and as the story progressed , the plot became complicated and first, I was not really absorbed in reading this. I just read this for my sanity's sake (baliw lang xD). I already read almost ALL IR fanfics and I crave for IR (the manga can't satiate it for now so the best alternative is fanfiction), so I searched for new fanfics and thank God I gave this story a shot! I was not disappointed and I am craving for more!
Please continue this story and update soon! You left us with an exciting turn of events! What was Rukia doing there? Will Ichigo change his mind and accept yoruichi's offer ealier after he saw Rukia? (Wishful thinking lng nmn, I know that he'll be wondering why Rukia's there and I'm sure he'll be having a HARD , very HARD time there xD). Thank god too that he decided to temporarily? Stop his relationship with Inoue. I cringed reading their love scene, blaah! At least if ever he'll realized then his feeling for Rukia and pursue her, no one will be disrespected and it would be right. I badly want an IR fluff so I hope there'll be in the next chapter. Ganbatte binibining author ;) Nakakaproud ka kababayan ko!
Your story is simply amazing! You started it simple and as the story progressed , the plot became complicated and first, I was not really absorbed in reading this. I just read this for my sanity's sake (baliw lang xD). I already read almost ALL IR fanfics and I crave for IR (the manga can't satiate it for now so the best alternative is fanfiction), so I searched for new fanfics and thank God I gave this story a shot! I was not disappointed and I am craving for more!
Please continue this story and update soon! You left us with an exciting turn of events! What was Rukia doing there? Will Ichigo change his mind and accept yoruichi's offer ealier after he saw Rukia? (Wishful thinking lng nmn, I know that he'll be wondering why Rukia's there and I'm sure he'll be having a HARD , very HARD time there xD). Thank god too that he decided to temporarily? Stop his relationship with Inoue. I cringed reading their love scene, blaah! At least if ever he'll realized then his feeling for Rukia and pursue her, no one will be disrespected and it would be right. I badly want an IR fluff so I hope there'll be in the next chapter. Ganbatte binibining author ;) Nakakaproud ka kababayan ko!
5/16/2016 c7 NieveDrop
Thank you for providing some more background and character development of the supporting characters in the chapters. It is very useful to the progression of the story. :)
Thank you for providing some more background and character development of the supporting characters in the chapters. It is very useful to the progression of the story. :)
5/15/2016 c7 kejora
other point that I like about your story is that you make it real in each progressing story..not too rush or not too slow. And If possible maybe we can get also point of view from other character beside Ichi. can not wait for up date
other point that I like about your story is that you make it real in each progressing story..not too rush or not too slow. And If possible maybe we can get also point of view from other character beside Ichi. can not wait for up date
5/15/2016 c7 Guest
I really love your story ! I m happy that ichigo finally broke up with orihime, only rukia deserve ichigo ! Please update soon :)
I really love your story ! I m happy that ichigo finally broke up with orihime, only rukia deserve ichigo ! Please update soon :)
5/15/2016 c7 hopelessromantic
oh.. please! i need that mini harem here! i want lots and lots of jealousy around. about the latest chapter, I'm not worried. don't worry, kubo will deliver! i'm sure of that :)
oh.. please! i need that mini harem here! i want lots and lots of jealousy around. about the latest chapter, I'm not worried. don't worry, kubo will deliver! i'm sure of that :)
5/15/2016 c7 Sayuri
OMG why did you stop here ! If this is not torture, I don't know what it is !
The meeting between inoue and the other was a little short, I like it but it was so fast.
Nevermind, this chapter was very good ! we know a little bit about uryuu, chad and the other, there is action. No it was great ! I thought that Inoue would be more depressed and sad about their break up. I don't know, when I read the manga, I always see Inoue as the girl who cries everytime. (Maybe I am too mean with her ahah) and really the last chapter of bleach when Ichigo asked the help of Inoue, I thought it was not necessary. What could she really do ?
Please update soon !
OMG why did you stop here ! If this is not torture, I don't know what it is !
The meeting between inoue and the other was a little short, I like it but it was so fast.
Nevermind, this chapter was very good ! we know a little bit about uryuu, chad and the other, there is action. No it was great ! I thought that Inoue would be more depressed and sad about their break up. I don't know, when I read the manga, I always see Inoue as the girl who cries everytime. (Maybe I am too mean with her ahah) and really the last chapter of bleach when Ichigo asked the help of Inoue, I thought it was not necessary. What could she really do ?
Please update soon !
5/11/2016 c6 Lilyglamstar123
Awesome! Pls do more they are so inspirational and creative I love how make it so descriptive! pls do more !
Awesome! Pls do more they are so inspirational and creative I love how make it so descriptive! pls do more !
5/11/2016 c6 yeahbuddy2256
This story is getting real intense, I can barely handle it. I'm so curious as to the reasons they have for joining the rebel groups. I'm trying to guess but I'm pretty sure I'm not even close. Regardless of my lack of ability in predicting the future of your story I still absolutely adore it.
This story is getting real intense, I can barely handle it. I'm so curious as to the reasons they have for joining the rebel groups. I'm trying to guess but I'm pretty sure I'm not even close. Regardless of my lack of ability in predicting the future of your story I still absolutely adore it.
5/11/2016 c6 q.jane409
Wow...it's good but slow pacing. There are so many mysteries ahead and the misunderstanding is needed to be cleared!
Wow...it's good but slow pacing. There are so many mysteries ahead and the misunderstanding is needed to be cleared!
5/10/2016 c6 Kejora
Like a lot of your story for you are good in putting emo of each characters
Like a lot of your story for you are good in putting emo of each characters