for Battle of Ideology5/10/2016 c6 Sayuri
Hey ! It was again a great chapter ! How do you do for writing such history ? I tried once in french and I have never been able to finish it ! Well it is quite far from the original manga (I mean about the relationship) but it is so cool like it ! You have brillant idea ! The more I read you the more I love this story !
The idea about the feeling of Grimmjow or tatsuki are really great and it doesn't bother me. Morevore the discussion between rukia and ichigo was well-written ! I love the temper of Rukia and her determination !
I dare thinking that masaki is still alive, am I right ?
It was funny because right after my spanish exam I checked on the website and you had published this chapter ! It was again a reward ;) again one exam and it is over *music of Frozen on the background*
Thanks for this amazing chapter ! I look forward to reading from you (as always i check every day ;) )
Hey ! It was again a great chapter ! How do you do for writing such history ? I tried once in french and I have never been able to finish it ! Well it is quite far from the original manga (I mean about the relationship) but it is so cool like it ! You have brillant idea ! The more I read you the more I love this story !
The idea about the feeling of Grimmjow or tatsuki are really great and it doesn't bother me. Morevore the discussion between rukia and ichigo was well-written ! I love the temper of Rukia and her determination !
I dare thinking that masaki is still alive, am I right ?
It was funny because right after my spanish exam I checked on the website and you had published this chapter ! It was again a reward ;) again one exam and it is over *music of Frozen on the background*
Thanks for this amazing chapter ! I look forward to reading from you (as always i check every day ;) )
5/10/2016 c6 hopelessromantic
bruh... kinda annoyed with ichigo's stubbornness in this chapter (but it's really pretty IC for him)... and damn... i'm liking the mini rukia reverse harem here. in the future, i really would like to see a rukia reverse harem from you (kung pwede lang naman xP)
bruh... kinda annoyed with ichigo's stubbornness in this chapter (but it's really pretty IC for him)... and damn... i'm liking the mini rukia reverse harem here. in the future, i really would like to see a rukia reverse harem from you (kung pwede lang naman xP)
5/8/2016 c4 Guest
GOD DAMN IT STOP WITH THE CLIFF HANGERS! WHY ARE RUKIA AND RENJI WITH THE LEFTERS I WANT TO KNOW SO BADLY! (Really good story so far man! Cliff hangers are killing me, but I wouldn't have it any other way :D )
GOD DAMN IT STOP WITH THE CLIFF HANGERS! WHY ARE RUKIA AND RENJI WITH THE LEFTERS I WANT TO KNOW SO BADLY! (Really good story so far man! Cliff hangers are killing me, but I wouldn't have it any other way :D )
5/8/2016 c1 Guest
Your story is fantastic :) Please update soon, I can't wait to see what will happen between Rukia and Ichigo !
Your story is fantastic :) Please update soon, I can't wait to see what will happen between Rukia and Ichigo !
5/8/2016 c5 
3NieveDrop
I'd love to get some more background in this story. The pace to this confrontation has been very rapid, and we have yet to know who the larger players are. I know that might be part of the mystery of your story, but just getting some information on the other people to whom we have been introduced would be helpful. What has drawn Chad, Uryu, and Hisagi to the military...Hisagi especially, the others involved in the military haven't been canon Shinigami. And you've placed all the other canon Shinigami on the Lefter's side, implicitly including Isshin. But what drew these other soldiers here, where are /their/ ideologies, and how far can Ichigo trust them?
Caring or learning about the people who surround the main characters helps direct our feelings for the main characters more. Also, we have no strong indication of what each of these sides are fighting for. What /is/ each side's mission and ideology because we are apparently now seeing in-fighting?
This is a fascinating concept for a story, but right now, you seem to be so focused on bringing Rukia and Ichigo together (and what IchiRuki fan doesn't want that), that you are merely skimming the surface of a much bigger plot.
3NieveDropI'd love to get some more background in this story. The pace to this confrontation has been very rapid, and we have yet to know who the larger players are. I know that might be part of the mystery of your story, but just getting some information on the other people to whom we have been introduced would be helpful. What has drawn Chad, Uryu, and Hisagi to the military...Hisagi especially, the others involved in the military haven't been canon Shinigami. And you've placed all the other canon Shinigami on the Lefter's side, implicitly including Isshin. But what drew these other soldiers here, where are /their/ ideologies, and how far can Ichigo trust them?
Caring or learning about the people who surround the main characters helps direct our feelings for the main characters more. Also, we have no strong indication of what each of these sides are fighting for. What /is/ each side's mission and ideology because we are apparently now seeing in-fighting?
This is a fascinating concept for a story, but right now, you seem to be so focused on bringing Rukia and Ichigo together (and what IchiRuki fan doesn't want that), that you are merely skimming the surface of a much bigger plot.
5/8/2016 c5 hopelessromantic
this kind of scenario was a thing that i always imagined when i was in high school trying to create a fiction story.
this kind of scenario was a thing that i always imagined when i was in high school trying to create a fiction story.
5/8/2016 c5 Sayuri
Why did you stop here ! I want to know
It was short very well-written ! Hope to see the next part soon !
Why did you stop here ! I want to know
It was short very well-written ! Hope to see the next part soon !
5/8/2016 c5 ej
perhaps rukia will fake faint...then suprise ichigo when his defense is down...suspense...
perhaps rukia will fake faint...then suprise ichigo when his defense is down...suspense...
5/4/2016 c4 Guest
hah. bantay. natutuwa naman ako at gumagamit ka ng mga Filipino words. IR Filipino fan reprsent!
hah. bantay. natutuwa naman ako at gumagamit ka ng mga Filipino words. IR Filipino fan reprsent!
5/4/2016 c4 Sayuri
It was so great to get your new chapter after 3 hours of exam ! I feel much more better like a reward after the battle !
This chapter (as always) is soooo good ! I hate Uryuu ! Why did he have to come at this moment precisely ?! Rohh too much suspense !
The reunion with Grimmjow or Isshin was really great ! It becomes more and more interesting !
... have you said "next week" ? noooooooooooooooooooo it means at least 4 days ! It's a torture ! Why me !
Ok I will wait and I will check everyday (yes EVERYDAY) ! In any case, thanks for this chapter which has came very quickly !
It was so great to get your new chapter after 3 hours of exam ! I feel much more better like a reward after the battle !
This chapter (as always) is soooo good ! I hate Uryuu ! Why did he have to come at this moment precisely ?! Rohh too much suspense !
The reunion with Grimmjow or Isshin was really great ! It becomes more and more interesting !
... have you said "next week" ? noooooooooooooooooooo it means at least 4 days ! It's a torture ! Why me !
Ok I will wait and I will check everyday (yes EVERYDAY) ! In any case, thanks for this chapter which has came very quickly !
5/3/2016 c3 sayuri
To be honest, I think I'm a bit crazy because I've checked at least 5 times a day for a new chapter since the chapter 2 !
How happy I was when I finally readed this chapter 3 ! God this story is so cool ! It was such a good idea to create this universe with characters from Bleach.
This chapter was very good and I just can't wait to know what really happened to Rukia and Renji. What was doing Grimmjow during those events. How will react Rukia after taking cognizance of the relation between Ichigo and Orihime ... So many questions ... The next events seem to be very interesting !
If I was temperamental, I would order you to give me the next chapter now but I know it's impossible ... (maybe if I ware God ... nevermind).
So I'm always here to read your story, please update (very ?) soon :D
To be honest, I think I'm a bit crazy because I've checked at least 5 times a day for a new chapter since the chapter 2 !
How happy I was when I finally readed this chapter 3 ! God this story is so cool ! It was such a good idea to create this universe with characters from Bleach.
This chapter was very good and I just can't wait to know what really happened to Rukia and Renji. What was doing Grimmjow during those events. How will react Rukia after taking cognizance of the relation between Ichigo and Orihime ... So many questions ... The next events seem to be very interesting !
If I was temperamental, I would order you to give me the next chapter now but I know it's impossible ... (maybe if I ware God ... nevermind).
So I'm always here to read your story, please update (very ?) soon :D
5/3/2016 c3 hopelessromantic
kinda peeved out with the slight IH there, but I know this was going to be IR soo..
kinda peeved out with the slight IH there, but I know this was going to be IR soo..