for Beating the Clock5/27/2020 c1 Guest
A very well written story. Top marks, although reading the bit about Alfred really hit me deep. It's been forever since I've read a fic where he only exists as a memory.
A very well written story. Top marks, although reading the bit about Alfred really hit me deep. It's been forever since I've read a fic where he only exists as a memory.
11/4/2016 c1 
43BenRG
Maybe the time HAS come to pass on the mantle and the torch to one of the boys - Tim Drake would be the best option, IMO. However, that doesn't reduce you to uselessness. The World's Greatest Detective does not need the cowl of a bat or to beat in scum's skulls to be an effective resource to the League or even just to Gotham City.
43BenRGMaybe the time HAS come to pass on the mantle and the torch to one of the boys - Tim Drake would be the best option, IMO. However, that doesn't reduce you to uselessness. The World's Greatest Detective does not need the cowl of a bat or to beat in scum's skulls to be an effective resource to the League or even just to Gotham City.
5/30/2016 c1 LadyRazorsharp
That was great. Very nicely done. A few awkward sentences you might want to tighten up-can you say the same thing with fewer words, or more pointed words? You're doing very well, and your writing will sing if you make sure things are nice and tight.
That was great. Very nicely done. A few awkward sentences you might want to tighten up-can you say the same thing with fewer words, or more pointed words? You're doing very well, and your writing will sing if you make sure things are nice and tight.
5/1/2016 c1 115Classic Cowboy
great one shot! loved the concept behind this as well. Bruce's greatest enemy is the fact he's only human...
115Classic Cowboygreat one shot! loved the concept behind this as well. Bruce's greatest enemy is the fact he's only human...
4/26/2016 c1 adiaz2049
Wonderful story, batman always seems so strong and unstoppable. But I forget he is only human.
Wonderful story, batman always seems so strong and unstoppable. But I forget he is only human.
4/26/2016 c1 6BruDia
it felt like an justice league and BMWW storyline!
can we get more like this one, friend?!.
thank you
6BruDiait felt like an justice league and BMWW storyline!
can we get more like this one, friend?!.
thank you
4/26/2016 c1 CrazyPhenom
Ahh, the mortality issue. The bane of our existence. Nicely done wheelzsy, its cool to see even that could be overcome.
Ahh, the mortality issue. The bane of our existence. Nicely done wheelzsy, its cool to see even that could be overcome.