for Lightining Luffy rewrite3/17/2020 c6 Guest
God I hate Kuro
God I hate Kuro
10/27/2017 c7 gabriela.sprott
Hi love your story. Just one this zoro's last name is roronoa. You wrote roroanorao zoro.
Hi love your story. Just one this zoro's last name is roronoa. You wrote roroanorao zoro.
10/27/2017 c7 1434792
will you add Vivi and Conis to Luffy's crew?, like Vivi as the negotiator, Conis as the gunner and therapist, and also Jinbei as the helmsman and Carrot the rabbit mink as the lookout as well, can you do that please?, thank you and good luck.
will you add Vivi and Conis to Luffy's crew?, like Vivi as the negotiator, Conis as the gunner and therapist, and also Jinbei as the helmsman and Carrot the rabbit mink as the lookout as well, can you do that please?, thank you and good luck.
8/7/2017 c6 Guest
I love!
I love!
8/1/2017 c5 Guest
Very interesting story! I love your writing
Very interesting story! I love your writing
7/27/2017 c4 midnightscar17
Ya know a little grammar check would be great. The storys great hope to see it come bac to life
Ya know a little grammar check would be great. The storys great hope to see it come bac to life
1/28/2017 c3 midnightscar17
Another great chapter but it could use a bit of a clean up on grammar and what not
Another great chapter but it could use a bit of a clean up on grammar and what not
1/28/2017 c3 
8The Keeper of Worlds
Nice job, curious how Nami will row back in, and when did Sabo get found? Nice song picks though:-)
8The Keeper of WorldsNice job, curious how Nami will row back in, and when did Sabo get found? Nice song picks though:-)