12/2/2016 c1 Aryan229
Good start. Oliver looks vulnerable. Liked moment between them.

9/14/2016 c1 tsp
keep going

5/1/2016 c1 114changingdestiny40
Thank you for writing this and adding another Oliver/Sara story to this site and for your support. You've done a very good job writing it and really did an excellent job presenting each character's emotions. You've done an even better job than my own version of this which is entitled "Star City 2046 AU (Canarrow Version). Please give it a look if you haven't already.

As for continuing it, please do. I'd really like to read more and want to know what could happen next. Does Sara stay in the future with old Oliver ? Does she and present Oliver immediately rekindle their romance after she returns home from the mission ? A lot of possibilities. I do hope you'll continue this and add more, and I'll be reading if you decide to do so.

I must say that the episode should've really gone the way your version did.

Have a good day.

4/30/2016 c1 45Dante 101
A more realistic take on Star City 2046. I like this.

While the idea of a multi-chap is interesting, this is better off as a oneshot.