7/16/2016 c14 1MRTJE
Thanks for the review. I wasn't sure if it was finished, my friend who read it for me suggested a different ending and I when I published it I was still unsure whether I would continue or not.
However, now I have decided that it is.
As for their feelings, you are right, they never did voice them. I think that Beca felt there might be something there, and possibly Chloe did to, but deep down they both knew that destroying what Beca and Jesse had for a chance was a bad idea. I think your summary of "each seemed content to just be there for one another" is exactly what they decided and what I envisaged them to think and feel.
Thanks for the review. I wasn't sure if it was finished, my friend who read it for me suggested a different ending and I when I published it I was still unsure whether I would continue or not.
However, now I have decided that it is.
As for their feelings, you are right, they never did voice them. I think that Beca felt there might be something there, and possibly Chloe did to, but deep down they both knew that destroying what Beca and Jesse had for a chance was a bad idea. I think your summary of "each seemed content to just be there for one another" is exactly what they decided and what I envisaged them to think and feel.
5/2/2016 c14 30RJRMovieFan
Cute story. Is it finished? It seemed to have resolution in chapter 14. The story played out a bit different than I was expecting based on the opening chapter. Not sure if there was any resolution to Beca's feelings for Chloe or vice versa. Nothing was ever voiced, but each seemed content to just be there for one another.
It was good.
Cute story. Is it finished? It seemed to have resolution in chapter 14. The story played out a bit different than I was expecting based on the opening chapter. Not sure if there was any resolution to Beca's feelings for Chloe or vice versa. Nothing was ever voiced, but each seemed content to just be there for one another.
It was good.