
8/29/2022 c2 realfan16
all well spoken full hopes and wishes, yet here we are 6 years later...still chap 2
all well spoken full hopes and wishes, yet here we are 6 years later...still chap 2
4/1/2018 c2
10Sanatoria
Heh, yeah this is pretty confusing so far... but in a good way! As in, I can tell that it's well-planned out and structured, so I'm looking forward to seeing what happens to Naruto. Does he kill Jiraiya? :( I haven't read many fics where Naruto turns dark, but this looks veeerrry promising. I love the poetic feel to the whole thing. I hope you still have plans for it, and it hasn't been discontinued! I think I'll go check out your fic Kyuubi now. ;)

Heh, yeah this is pretty confusing so far... but in a good way! As in, I can tell that it's well-planned out and structured, so I'm looking forward to seeing what happens to Naruto. Does he kill Jiraiya? :( I haven't read many fics where Naruto turns dark, but this looks veeerrry promising. I love the poetic feel to the whole thing. I hope you still have plans for it, and it hasn't been discontinued! I think I'll go check out your fic Kyuubi now. ;)
1/4/2018 c2 Otaku
It’s 2018 now
It’s 2018 now
6/27/2017 c1 megamindwriter
Truly your writing style is in a league of its own. Its descriptive, perspective-enhancing, sophisticated, and dare I say; better than John Green. This story seems to be turning out quite well. Your characters always remind so much of canon. They are alive in their own way.
Truly your writing style is in a league of its own. Its descriptive, perspective-enhancing, sophisticated, and dare I say; better than John Green. This story seems to be turning out quite well. Your characters always remind so much of canon. They are alive in their own way.
12/27/2016 c2
1Aegorm
you published 5k words in roughly 7 months. And those 5k words are fragmented and confusing.
I guess this has 'some' potential but rigt now it just looks horrible really. You'd be better off rewriting this again and pumping out at least a decent first arc.

you published 5k words in roughly 7 months. And those 5k words are fragmented and confusing.
I guess this has 'some' potential but rigt now it just looks horrible really. You'd be better off rewriting this again and pumping out at least a decent first arc.
11/5/2016 c2 jemxmarcial
I found Kyuubi first and thought; 'hey this story is pretty awesome!' then found out about this rewrite. Hope to see more of this soon hohohoho I'm really hooked with this, Naruto-is-Kyuubi thing and I think I'll be in a one hell of a ride with this fic. Kudos to you!
I found Kyuubi first and thought; 'hey this story is pretty awesome!' then found out about this rewrite. Hope to see more of this soon hohohoho I'm really hooked with this, Naruto-is-Kyuubi thing and I think I'll be in a one hell of a ride with this fic. Kudos to you!
11/5/2016 c2
9NarHina
Nice though it was a bit confusing I like how Naruto is both accepting yet fighting himself.
Also loved how you had dark Naruto mention that he was a second concern to Jiraiya and not his main priority like he should be.
Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

Nice though it was a bit confusing I like how Naruto is both accepting yet fighting himself.
Also loved how you had dark Naruto mention that he was a second concern to Jiraiya and not his main priority like he should be.
Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
11/5/2016 c1 NarHina
Can't wait I just hope their is a bit NaruHina and that Hinata doesn't end up with someone else.
Also like how you've done dark Naruto and Naruto losing himself slowly.
Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
Can't wait I just hope their is a bit NaruHina and that Hinata doesn't end up with someone else.
Also like how you've done dark Naruto and Naruto losing himself slowly.
Naruto and Hinata Forever:)