
1/3/2018 c4 Anonymous otaku
How do you adopt stories? Because this is so good and I’d like to see it flourish!
How do you adopt stories? Because this is so good and I’d like to see it flourish!
10/21/2017 c3 Jinxxs
im still curious about why ed didnt just fix the vase with alchemy
im still curious about why ed didnt just fix the vase with alchemy
8/13/2017 c1 Caity-devil788
Hey steel heart! Didn't think I would come across you so easily!
Hey steel heart! Didn't think I would come across you so easily!
6/2/2017 c1 Guest
like the story
like the story
4/19/2017 c1 Pikapalsforever12
Tamaki, you really thought that I wouldn't notice? "You didn't get to eat some during last CHAPTER'S party." You broke the fourth wall and you thought that I wouldn't notice your crime. Go and fix it right now! (Sorry I had to once I noticed it XD)
Tamaki, you really thought that I wouldn't notice? "You didn't get to eat some during last CHAPTER'S party." You broke the fourth wall and you thought that I wouldn't notice your crime. Go and fix it right now! (Sorry I had to once I noticed it XD)
1/27/2017 c4 Glenn
Please don't discontinue this story or put it up for adoption, please! I love this story already, so continue the story whenever you're ready, no rush. So please I'm begging u, don't discontinue the story or put it up for adoption, please!
Please don't discontinue this story or put it up for adoption, please! I love this story already, so continue the story whenever you're ready, no rush. So please I'm begging u, don't discontinue the story or put it up for adoption, please!
1/17/2017 c1 Guest
"You got two, strong legs, don't you?"
BWAHAHAHAHAHA OH ED
"You got two, strong legs, don't you?"
BWAHAHAHAHAHA OH ED
1/10/2017 c5 Dragonsblue
Hello! I'm going off what you said in an earlier chapter! TIME TO UPDATE PLEASE
Hello! I'm going off what you said in an earlier chapter! TIME TO UPDATE PLEASE
1/6/2017 c1
3Taranodongirl1
I wonder how the Lobelia girls will react to Ed since apparently he is "as pretty as a girl"

I wonder how the Lobelia girls will react to Ed since apparently he is "as pretty as a girl"
12/19/2016 c5 Guest
PLEASE UPDATE!
PLEASE UPDATE!
10/26/2016 c5
3xXMapleLeafXx
Brilliant story, well written very interesting to read. Please update soon

Brilliant story, well written very interesting to read. Please update soon
10/23/2016 c5 Meh
It's okay, take your time with updating! I look forward to them meeting Al and seeing overprotective Ed.
P.S: Will any of the homunculi (like Greedling for example) be part of this?
It's okay, take your time with updating! I look forward to them meeting Al and seeing overprotective Ed.
P.S: Will any of the homunculi (like Greedling for example) be part of this?