for Confessions9/16/2004 c5 
2crazywolfgrrl
Farfie w/blender-very good thing. I love this fic! You put in some very unique pairings! Not enough Farfie/yohji out there. I look forward to more of your work!
2crazywolfgrrlFarfie w/blender-very good thing. I love this fic! You put in some very unique pairings! Not enough Farfie/yohji out there. I look forward to more of your work!
9/19/2003 c4 9Misura
[Hm, a little maybe. ;)]
A lovely read (rather than saying Schu's your favorite I'd say each chapter's better than the one before maybe) about a lovely couple. I like the way Schu explains his feelings for Omi and the things he compares him with ; it's very cute. I also enjoyed the way you brought his Gift into this conversation, and Schu's sense of ironic humor. ^_^ A great read!
9Misura[Hm, a little maybe. ;)]
A lovely read (rather than saying Schu's your favorite I'd say each chapter's better than the one before maybe) about a lovely couple. I like the way Schu explains his feelings for Omi and the things he compares him with ; it's very cute. I also enjoyed the way you brought his Gift into this conversation, and Schu's sense of ironic humor. ^_^ A great read!
9/19/2003 c3 Misura
AH, I loved this chapter ; the whole one-sided dialogue setting is brought out even stronger in this one, and in a very agreeable way too. I think you definitely captured Farfarello's mind (and heart?) very well in this ; he's very much himself. A wonderful read!
AH, I loved this chapter ; the whole one-sided dialogue setting is brought out even stronger in this one, and in a very agreeable way too. I think you definitely captured Farfarello's mind (and heart?) very well in this ; he's very much himself. A wonderful read!
9/19/2003 c2 Misura
Ah, my favorite character, talking about my favorite pairing (all right, so it's only one of them, but still). I like the comparison you had him make, between the tree Estet chopped and the man who ruined Estet (Hah! Poetical justice!) and of course I loved the different take on Aya-chan's abduction. A lovely, loveable portrait of Crawford. ^_^ I think he deserves Ran to give him a chance, don't you, Ken?
Ah, my favorite character, talking about my favorite pairing (all right, so it's only one of them, but still). I like the comparison you had him make, between the tree Estet chopped and the man who ruined Estet (Hah! Poetical justice!) and of course I loved the different take on Aya-chan's abduction. A lovely, loveable portrait of Crawford. ^_^ I think he deserves Ran to give him a chance, don't you, Ken?
9/19/2003 c1 Misura
I like the way you wrote this, and the way you made this a one-sided dialogue, with Nagi responding to certain remarks you didn't let the reader hear. I think you did a very good job on describing Nagi's feelings about the wielder of the lethal umbrella. A highly enjoyable read.
I like the way you wrote this, and the way you made this a one-sided dialogue, with Nagi responding to certain remarks you didn't let the reader hear. I think you did a very good job on describing Nagi's feelings about the wielder of the lethal umbrella. A highly enjoyable read.
2/24/2003 c4 Briar Rose6
Somehow, that feels *right* - Schu drawn to Omi, finding his mind like sunshine "bright and warm but not without that hint of danger." You've made a strong case for a less-than-usual pairing, and I love your thinking. I hope you work more in the WK universe - you write well, and have a good handle on the characters. We all love our shonen ai, and you have some good twists of humor, too.
Somehow, that feels *right* - Schu drawn to Omi, finding his mind like sunshine "bright and warm but not without that hint of danger." You've made a strong case for a less-than-usual pairing, and I love your thinking. I hope you work more in the WK universe - you write well, and have a good handle on the characters. We all love our shonen ai, and you have some good twists of humor, too.
2/24/2003 c3 Briar Rose6
*Nice* accent for Farf. And crazy does not mean stupid. I like to see someone doing something with Farf besides drawing blood and licking knives. Farf has to have *some* other interests or he is useless as a character. Against my expectations, hearing the pairing from Farf's point of view actually makes me think it would work. Between the booze, cigarettes, clubbing and one-night stands, Yohji is in a major down-hill spiral, and obviously hasn't found anything in the "normal" world worth clinging to, that would halt his slide to disaster. Viewed from that aspect, maybe Farf *would* make a good partner for him.
*Nice* accent for Farf. And crazy does not mean stupid. I like to see someone doing something with Farf besides drawing blood and licking knives. Farf has to have *some* other interests or he is useless as a character. Against my expectations, hearing the pairing from Farf's point of view actually makes me think it would work. Between the booze, cigarettes, clubbing and one-night stands, Yohji is in a major down-hill spiral, and obviously hasn't found anything in the "normal" world worth clinging to, that would halt his slide to disaster. Viewed from that aspect, maybe Farf *would* make a good partner for him.
2/24/2003 c3 Lii
Not bad, not bad at all. Quite good in fact. Excessive amounts of slang are good, so long as they don't confuse people. That's an interesting pairing-Farf+Yoji. Not one I see often. Good work.
Not bad, not bad at all. Quite good in fact. Excessive amounts of slang are good, so long as they don't confuse people. That's an interesting pairing-Farf+Yoji. Not one I see often. Good work.
2/24/2003 c2 Briar Rose6
So there's the cold, all-business working Crawford, and the more personable, "after-hours" Brad. Why should that surprise anyone? Crawford and Aya make a wonderful pairing. Beautiful, perceiptive characterization of Aya, like Brad's tree, ". strong and cold. .who could stand calmly through a storm, a person who might just be safe. He was tough, wasn't going to die just when I needed him."
So there's the cold, all-business working Crawford, and the more personable, "after-hours" Brad. Why should that surprise anyone? Crawford and Aya make a wonderful pairing. Beautiful, perceiptive characterization of Aya, like Brad's tree, ". strong and cold. .who could stand calmly through a storm, a person who might just be safe. He was tough, wasn't going to die just when I needed him."
2/24/2003 c4 7Kasra
*grin* SchuOmi is one of my favorite pairings, and I really like the way you've handled it in this fic. I especially like the concept that Schuldig would be interested in Omi because he's the one that can "quiet the voices." I also like that Omi isn't immediately willing, but that it takes him some time to finally come around.
Really interesting story overall - I like that you've got some very untraditional pairings in there especially. I think you could make me into a FarfYohji fan, even.
Anyhow, I enjoyed it alot, and I hope to read more from you in the future! ^_^
7Kasra*grin* SchuOmi is one of my favorite pairings, and I really like the way you've handled it in this fic. I especially like the concept that Schuldig would be interested in Omi because he's the one that can "quiet the voices." I also like that Omi isn't immediately willing, but that it takes him some time to finally come around.
Really interesting story overall - I like that you've got some very untraditional pairings in there especially. I think you could make me into a FarfYohji fan, even.
Anyhow, I enjoyed it alot, and I hope to read more from you in the future! ^_^
2/24/2003 c2 Aniron
I like them lots. I like a lot of what you've got on here. Keep it up, and let me know when there's more!
I like them lots. I like a lot of what you've got on here. Keep it up, and let me know when there's more!
1/23/2003 c1 1Ryuke-Naoe
interesting. something that doesn't portray tot as a annoying little hairbrained child. i probably wouldn't mind her if it wasn't for the costume. that just... *twitch*
1Ryuke-Naoeinteresting. something that doesn't portray tot as a annoying little hairbrained child. i probably wouldn't mind her if it wasn't for the costume. that just... *twitch*
1/21/2003 c1 Kat
Wai! I liked the way you described Tot - very nice! I'm glad there's another person out there who likes Tot- *heh*
Can't wait for more! :D
Wai! I liked the way you described Tot - very nice! I'm glad there's another person out there who likes Tot- *heh*
Can't wait for more! :D