for The Perfect Halo of Gold Hair and Lightning4/23/2019 c2 PheonixQueen15
This story is awesome! If, or when, you ever decide to write the next chapter I would love to read it!
This story is awesome! If, or when, you ever decide to write the next chapter I would love to read it!
8/19/2018 c2 Guest
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I adore it.
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I adore it.
6/10/2018 c2 
34HikaruWinter
Fight you? I'm your fucking second. I fucking share this headcanon and eagerly join your no doubt swelling army against the puny flamers.
34HikaruWinterFight you? I'm your fucking second. I fucking share this headcanon and eagerly join your no doubt swelling army against the puny flamers.
10/14/2017 c2 1RinXLenXMiku
This is great! And I love how you also focused on Cloud's mom, it's great to see the situation in Nibelheim as you imagen it and I love every second of it! I can't wait to see what happens next, because this is wonderful!
1RinXLenXMikuThis is great! And I love how you also focused on Cloud's mom, it's great to see the situation in Nibelheim as you imagen it and I love every second of it! I can't wait to see what happens next, because this is wonderful!
7/10/2017 c2 Electro34
Absolutely loved the idea and you pulled it off beautifully I so so wish you would continue.
Absolutely loved the idea and you pulled it off beautifully I so so wish you would continue.
1/21/2017 c2 1Beloved Daughter
Love the idea of the Strife family literally running with wolves. I can only hope you will update the story again soon!
1Beloved DaughterLove the idea of the Strife family literally running with wolves. I can only hope you will update the story again soon!
1/21/2017 c2 136Scififan33
I like it a lot so far. Poor woman living in such a backward town. Really like Mrs Bennett and the wolves.
136Scififan33I like it a lot so far. Poor woman living in such a backward town. Really like Mrs Bennett and the wolves.
9/11/2016 c2 Marie
Wolves! Yes! No fight from me :)
Wolves! Yes! No fight from me :)
5/16/2016 c2 14ayufish
she was trying very (hard?) not to panic
not is not the time (now?)
aware for (of?)
wolves. this whole thing is beautiful.
14ayufishshe was trying very (hard?) not to panic
not is not the time (now?)
aware for (of?)
wolves. this whole thing is beautiful.
5/9/2016 c2 kvictor5987
This update made me so happy! I love how you showed a different strength is mama Strife. Though she is normally strong willed and strong morally I love the inclusion of the wolves and that mama Strife is a hunter and that could be where Cloud can learn to hunt as well as be strong willed. I would also like to see a little Cloud getting taken care of and growing up with the pack of wolves.
This update made me so happy! I love how you showed a different strength is mama Strife. Though she is normally strong willed and strong morally I love the inclusion of the wolves and that mama Strife is a hunter and that could be where Cloud can learn to hunt as well as be strong willed. I would also like to see a little Cloud getting taken care of and growing up with the pack of wolves.
5/8/2016 c2 TooEasilyDistracted
Interesting idea. If you do continue this (and you should) this background for Cloud would provide an interesting base for his and Zack's friendship (Zack being a "puppy"). I like how you wove in your OC's like Mrs. Bennett. You tied them into your work and explained them without veering from the main thread of the story.
Interesting idea. If you do continue this (and you should) this background for Cloud would provide an interesting base for his and Zack's friendship (Zack being a "puppy"). I like how you wove in your OC's like Mrs. Bennett. You tied them into your work and explained them without veering from the main thread of the story.