
4/22/2021 c28 zephyrthewinddragon
have you ever considered doing a hollow knight fanfic so many things you could do there im sure
have you ever considered doing a hollow knight fanfic so many things you could do there im sure
4/5/2021 c1 Fish
Someone was playing to much mgq
Someone was playing to much mgq
3/15/2021 c28 noobz4u14
Always look forward to the updates on this! The quality of the chapters makes it worth the wait.
Always look forward to the updates on this! The quality of the chapters makes it worth the wait.
3/11/2021 c8 Rosegfx
Y'know, as much good as the current author does with the pacifist route, the no mercy route has taken a major nosedive in quality. Ever since this author took over after chapter 7 or 8 it's just been getting progressively shorter and feels like it's just going through the motions. Chapters 1-7 left me amazed at the writing of both routes, chapter 8 and most of Snowdin was alright but didn't exactly match the high standards of the previous author, everything after just seems lackluster and rushing to the end. The No Mercy Undyne scene in particular was a major disappointment. Been following this story for a long time, but with the current quality of the writing the alert of an update just doesn't give the same excitement.
Y'know, as much good as the current author does with the pacifist route, the no mercy route has taken a major nosedive in quality. Ever since this author took over after chapter 7 or 8 it's just been getting progressively shorter and feels like it's just going through the motions. Chapters 1-7 left me amazed at the writing of both routes, chapter 8 and most of Snowdin was alright but didn't exactly match the high standards of the previous author, everything after just seems lackluster and rushing to the end. The No Mercy Undyne scene in particular was a major disappointment. Been following this story for a long time, but with the current quality of the writing the alert of an update just doesn't give the same excitement.
1/24/2021 c27 Guest
This is the best fanfic I’ve ever read. I’m so excited for new updates!
(Please make the No Mercy parts longer though)
This is the best fanfic I’ve ever read. I’m so excited for new updates!
(Please make the No Mercy parts longer though)
12/30/2020 c27 Guest
Hey when's the next chapter coming up?
Hey when's the next chapter coming up?
12/28/2020 c1 Dean Rider
I really injoys this a a lot, I just want to be raped by a frig rn you have no fucking idea. like god it was soooooo fucking hot mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I just cum rn. mmmm yes dady
I really injoys this a a lot, I just want to be raped by a frig rn you have no fucking idea. like god it was soooooo fucking hot mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I just cum rn. mmmm yes dady
12/26/2020 c27 Guest
Please update
Please update
12/16/2020 c1 Robloxn00b
But I do have to agree with some of the people below me, u are cutting the no mercy sections shorter and shorter, now this may have to do with genocide route generally being shorter and stuff, but I really hope you show it some love, and uhhhh I request that sans doesn’t turn to dust like undyne did...can’t fap to dust my man
But I do have to agree with some of the people below me, u are cutting the no mercy sections shorter and shorter, now this may have to do with genocide route generally being shorter and stuff, but I really hope you show it some love, and uhhhh I request that sans doesn’t turn to dust like undyne did...can’t fap to dust my man
12/13/2020 c1 Robloxn00b
It’s nice to read undertale porn that isn’t fontcest or some weird futa shit, thanks buddy for helping guys around the world fap, and uhhh possibly women? I hope not
It’s nice to read undertale porn that isn’t fontcest or some weird futa shit, thanks buddy for helping guys around the world fap, and uhhh possibly women? I hope not
12/4/2020 c18 King Wilson
Your writing is pretty good, I'm excited to read Muffet's part if possible. Also This username isn't my name. I just got it from a random dude from discord
Your writing is pretty good, I'm excited to read Muffet's part if possible. Also This username isn't my name. I just got it from a random dude from discord