
12/1/2020 c27 yes
good fanfic
good fanfic
11/24/2020 c27 SuperBearNeo
I remember reading this fanfiction way back when it first came out and to see it not only still going, but also improving as it goes along, is a treat to say the least and nostalgic
That being said, I love this fanfiction and it's probably the best Undertale fanfiction written on site
I remember reading this fanfiction way back when it first came out and to see it not only still going, but also improving as it goes along, is a treat to say the least and nostalgic
That being said, I love this fanfiction and it's probably the best Undertale fanfiction written on site
11/22/2020 c24
2Xerzo LotCN
this chapters no mercy haremocide kinda killed it for me again like a few chapters ago killing of the turtle
it had such a build up with undyne to end so lamely
like how did she for even a nano second take over their soul which makes no sense she can do that suddenly without her being the assaulter
also even if she could how could she know about save and reset
that definitely makes no sense only frisk flowey(chara asriel) sans and assumedly gaster know about it
so why would she know and comprehend it and force a save to rob them that makes no sense
honestly the auto save feature is the worst it ruined both situations with little benefits
also the grillbys end why didnt they just reload redo and stop that honestly

this chapters no mercy haremocide kinda killed it for me again like a few chapters ago killing of the turtle
it had such a build up with undyne to end so lamely
like how did she for even a nano second take over their soul which makes no sense she can do that suddenly without her being the assaulter
also even if she could how could she know about save and reset
that definitely makes no sense only frisk flowey(chara asriel) sans and assumedly gaster know about it
so why would she know and comprehend it and force a save to rob them that makes no sense
honestly the auto save feature is the worst it ruined both situations with little benefits
also the grillbys end why didnt they just reload redo and stop that honestly
11/22/2020 c27 Robloxn00b
Incredible, I’ve been reading since day 1, stopped fapping to this after the tenth chapter, now I’m just here for the plot. I usually stay on ao3 but this is one of the few high quality fics on this site. There is a decent amount of humor, and originality, but it is still staying true to the original undertale. Don’t stop writing man, but also don’t rush yourself.
Incredible, I’ve been reading since day 1, stopped fapping to this after the tenth chapter, now I’m just here for the plot. I usually stay on ao3 but this is one of the few high quality fics on this site. There is a decent amount of humor, and originality, but it is still staying true to the original undertale. Don’t stop writing man, but also don’t rush yourself.
11/21/2020 c27 noobz4u14
YASSSS! MY FAVORITE AUTHOR RETURNS WITH ANOTHER CHAPTER OF MY FAVORITE FANFIC
YASSSS! MY FAVORITE AUTHOR RETURNS WITH ANOTHER CHAPTER OF MY FAVORITE FANFIC
11/17/2020 c8 Guest
When can we expect the next chapter?
When can we expect the next chapter?
11/13/2020 c26 SlushMouth
Just... wow! Been reading anonymously for quite a while now, but finally built up the courage to comment-! Not gonna lie, sometimes when I leave and return a few months later to see another chapter... it gives me hope-
Just... wow! Been reading anonymously for quite a while now, but finally built up the courage to comment-! Not gonna lie, sometimes when I leave and return a few months later to see another chapter... it gives me hope-
10/4/2020 c11 Guest
Crosssenpai again I also wanted to say sincerely from the bottom of my heart as a reader thank you I really mean thank you because you actually continue to write let's be honest a lot of people write these awesome story and then just leave it to die halfway through and I want to say thank you truly thank you for not letting your story die I honestly love it
Crosssenpai again I also wanted to say sincerely from the bottom of my heart as a reader thank you I really mean thank you because you actually continue to write let's be honest a lot of people write these awesome story and then just leave it to die halfway through and I want to say thank you truly thank you for not letting your story die I honestly love it
10/4/2020 c11 Guest
Hey I just wanted to say I've been here from the beginning and I'm too lazy to make an account cuz I can remember my password LOL but I want to say your stories are great recently I've been an accident and I read your store a lot when I was in the hospital it led to some funny awkward situations but if you really want to contact me my Discord is crosssenpai#8999
Hey I just wanted to say I've been here from the beginning and I'm too lazy to make an account cuz I can remember my password LOL but I want to say your stories are great recently I've been an accident and I read your store a lot when I was in the hospital it led to some funny awkward situations but if you really want to contact me my Discord is crosssenpai#8999
9/10/2020 c26 Guest
Wow, just wow.
Wow, just wow.
8/18/2020 c26 Big Breatha
Finally! I waited 4 years for the introduction of Muffet. This chapter was a delight, I also have seen Harru's artwork of Muffet's siblings and milf spider mommy so that made this chapter even better!
Finally! I waited 4 years for the introduction of Muffet. This chapter was a delight, I also have seen Harru's artwork of Muffet's siblings and milf spider mommy so that made this chapter even better!
7/22/2020 c1 Love it
I love this fic but I have one complaint why did undyne have to die in the rape route
I love this fic but I have one complaint why did undyne have to die in the rape route
4/10/2020 c20 hadesjackson
I love this story and I'm going for the no mercy rout. I also love that you so as the two different routs.
I love this story and I'm going for the no mercy rout. I also love that you so as the two different routs.