for Mushroom Story5/6/2024 c42 
45PuzzleMaster1998
Hey, glad to see this updated!
I'll take a look!
good luck with writing!
45PuzzleMaster1998Hey, glad to see this updated!
I'll take a look!
good luck with writing!
5/1/2024 c41 BTL55
I really hope this fanfic continues. It's 1 in a billion. I get if it doesn't, but with the remake of ttyd coming out, THIS MONTH, I'd love to read more of thsi series
I really hope this fanfic continues. It's 1 in a billion. I get if it doesn't, but with the remake of ttyd coming out, THIS MONTH, I'd love to read more of thsi series
4/12/2023 c41 Guest
I am glad too see this back. I was worried it might be gone. Thanks for updating.
I am glad too see this back. I was worried it might be gone. Thanks for updating.
7/10/2022 c3 Guest
Why did you call Princess peach a prince instead of a
princess
Why did you call Princess peach a prince instead of a
princess
8/13/2021 c39 Timothy45
Great job here. So out of curiosity, did you have any plans to do the story of Thousand Year Door in some way shape or form after you finish Mushroom Story? Also I was surprised there was no mention of Mario's time as a baby during Yoshi's Island. But then again, different universe so probably not.
Great job here. So out of curiosity, did you have any plans to do the story of Thousand Year Door in some way shape or form after you finish Mushroom Story? Also I was surprised there was no mention of Mario's time as a baby during Yoshi's Island. But then again, different universe so probably not.
5/15/2021 c38 Trevor green
Can you please do more of the story and then can you please make the ending with all of Mario’s partners kiss him and then have sex with him in bed and then sleep together?
I will like this story if you do.
Can you please do more of the story and then can you please make the ending with all of Mario’s partners kiss him and then have sex with him in bed and then sleep together?
I will like this story if you do.
5/15/2021 c16 Guest
Can you please do more on the story and the ending where all of Mario’s partners kiss him and then have sex with him and sleeping in bed together please I will like this fanfiction if you do.
Can you please do more on the story and the ending where all of Mario’s partners kiss him and then have sex with him and sleeping in bed together please I will like this fanfiction if you do.
1/31/2021 c38 Guest
Sooo, I know I may be getting ahead of myself, but like, I have to know! Is Mario/Peach a thing in this universe? Because the more I imagine it and read the interludes, the cuter it sounds! I know this fic is really focusing on monster GIRLS and not monster boys, and that it's all been straight/some lesbian smut so far, but the endgame ship ending up actually being gay is funny, neat, and pure! You've been doing marvelous keeping things fresh by having different situations and bad endings, but I wonder if Mario possibly being bi is somewhere in the picture, maybe even before the ending? ;)
I'll be a bit down, but completely understand if you don't feel comfortable though! You'll still get a read from me. :)
Sooo, I know I may be getting ahead of myself, but like, I have to know! Is Mario/Peach a thing in this universe? Because the more I imagine it and read the interludes, the cuter it sounds! I know this fic is really focusing on monster GIRLS and not monster boys, and that it's all been straight/some lesbian smut so far, but the endgame ship ending up actually being gay is funny, neat, and pure! You've been doing marvelous keeping things fresh by having different situations and bad endings, but I wonder if Mario possibly being bi is somewhere in the picture, maybe even before the ending? ;)
I'll be a bit down, but completely understand if you don't feel comfortable though! You'll still get a read from me. :)
1/23/2021 c38 1Darksymphony777
i have two things to say
1: can we take nita back and have jenny join mario, she's so precious that i want to see more of her (hell i'll take a jenny one-shot side story)
2: i weirdly curious if you plan on doing thousand year door?
1Darksymphony777i have two things to say
1: can we take nita back and have jenny join mario, she's so precious that i want to see more of her (hell i'll take a jenny one-shot side story)
2: i weirdly curious if you plan on doing thousand year door?
1/14/2021 c38 random reader768
I do enjoy vore if it's soft, but I can see why a lot of people find it to be a turn off. Anyways, I love this story, and well as Under Tail. Both are super hot.
I do enjoy vore if it's soft, but I can see why a lot of people find it to be a turn off. Anyways, I love this story, and well as Under Tail. Both are super hot.
12/21/2020 c37 empatheticapathy
Nita, please! Diverging from canon is inherently more fun than sticking to it!
Nita, please! Diverging from canon is inherently more fun than sticking to it!
12/7/2020 c30 Guest
Wait...
purple and blue sweater...
determination
Is this..
ALL AN UNDERTALE REFERENCE?!
Wait...
purple and blue sweater...
determination
Is this..
ALL AN UNDERTALE REFERENCE?!
9/19/2020 c37 Space Trooper
Hopefully I'm not too late to the party. Half of me wants to pick Nita not only to break Paper Mario partner conventions, but I'm also interested how they will adapt in certain situations with Watt absent. The other half of me wants to pick Watt mostly in my interest in how Mario and Co. interact with her during the eventual sex scenes. In any case I'll put my vote for Nita, but I'm honestly fine with either or. Please keep up the good work and update soon!
Hopefully I'm not too late to the party. Half of me wants to pick Nita not only to break Paper Mario partner conventions, but I'm also interested how they will adapt in certain situations with Watt absent. The other half of me wants to pick Watt mostly in my interest in how Mario and Co. interact with her during the eventual sex scenes. In any case I'll put my vote for Nita, but I'm honestly fine with either or. Please keep up the good work and update soon!