for Thor Help Her4/23/2022 c1 
3Midgards Ormen
The whole “oh there’s a mysterious force stopping me from explaining things” is a total cop out. I don’t care if there’s some narrative excuse for it later, it’s a cop out.
3Midgards OrmenThe whole “oh there’s a mysterious force stopping me from explaining things” is a total cop out. I don’t care if there’s some narrative excuse for it later, it’s a cop out.
8/24/2021 c1 AnakinMousestalker
What an interesting premise, and so very well written. Looking forward to seeing what happens. Just wondering now if her older self is now in her younger body. I think that everyone has the fantasy of wondering what would happen if they were their younger self with the knowledge and experience of their older self. In my case, MUCH older.
I just discovered your writing, and am a huge HTTYD fan. Also new to fan fiction (as of March).
What an interesting premise, and so very well written. Looking forward to seeing what happens. Just wondering now if her older self is now in her younger body. I think that everyone has the fantasy of wondering what would happen if they were their younger self with the knowledge and experience of their older self. In my case, MUCH older.
I just discovered your writing, and am a huge HTTYD fan. Also new to fan fiction (as of March).
3/15/2021 c11 3imnotoverlyobsessive
Holy fucking shit my dude, like. Goddamn, I need a new pair of panties after that
3imnotoverlyobsessiveHoly fucking shit my dude, like. Goddamn, I need a new pair of panties after that
8/30/2020 c2 Anonymous
I just watched the hidden world and balled my eyes out at the end... Anyway great job with writing... I am a fellow writer but I write science fiction books, however I sadly don't have any published.
I just watched the hidden world and balled my eyes out at the end... Anyway great job with writing... I am a fellow writer but I write science fiction books, however I sadly don't have any published.
12/26/2019 c12 Guest
So:
96k words of Hiccup going ever deeper into Astrid and a little bit of Freya being an asshole.
Beautiful, 10/10
So:
96k words of Hiccup going ever deeper into Astrid and a little bit of Freya being an asshole.
Beautiful, 10/10
3/9/2019 c12 Guest
What the fuck? But like, in a good way.
What the fuck? But like, in a good way.
1/29/2019 c9 Guest
Really. Enough is enough. Hiccup really needs to find another girl friend. This has gone on longer than any normal person would let it and since Hiccup is not the one to "force" the issue his only other option is to leave Astrid. And this he should of done at least a couple of chapters ago.
Really. Enough is enough. Hiccup really needs to find another girl friend. This has gone on longer than any normal person would let it and since Hiccup is not the one to "force" the issue his only other option is to leave Astrid. And this he should of done at least a couple of chapters ago.
11/21/2018 c6 Guest
Yeah... I noticed the bulge too... WE CAN BE PERVERTS TOGETHER
Yeah... I noticed the bulge too... WE CAN BE PERVERTS TOGETHER
11/21/2018 c5 Guest
WHAT IS THAT TEA?!
Maybe it’s like a contraceptive to stop her getting pregnant? But... they haven’t... in a while...?
Okay now I’m just confusing myself here
WHAT IS THAT TEA?!
Maybe it’s like a contraceptive to stop her getting pregnant? But... they haven’t... in a while...?
Okay now I’m just confusing myself here
9/2/2018 c5 43bluepianos
are you seriously telling me that hiccup horrendous haddock iii willingly and purposely gave astrid MOON TEA without her knowing, damn son
43bluepianosare you seriously telling me that hiccup horrendous haddock iii willingly and purposely gave astrid MOON TEA without her knowing, damn son
8/24/2018 c12 12Hazel Topaz the Owl
You know a story is great when you go back to reread it, not once, not twice, but three times. I’m not sure if your still on FF. But if you are, just know that I loved this trilogy of yours and that this stays on here forever.
Thanks for the great, exciting, and emotional stories!
12Hazel Topaz the OwlYou know a story is great when you go back to reread it, not once, not twice, but three times. I’m not sure if your still on FF. But if you are, just know that I loved this trilogy of yours and that this stays on here forever.
Thanks for the great, exciting, and emotional stories!