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5/5/2016 c1 Guest
Please make more
Please make more
5/5/2016 c1 
1iggy2012
A good start that is, but read through your work you must, so mistakes you may find. Look forward to further chapters I do.
1iggy2012A good start that is, but read through your work you must, so mistakes you may find. Look forward to further chapters I do.
5/5/2016 c1 Winter Sprinkles
It's somehow good. I mean, some mistakes, like spacing, punctuation and minor grammar, but that's actually easy to fix by rereading it, or having someone else read it before publishing here.
The main problem is that it is quick, albeit some people like short stories (though, I think it's short even for a short story).
It's somehow good. I mean, some mistakes, like spacing, punctuation and minor grammar, but that's actually easy to fix by rereading it, or having someone else read it before publishing here.
The main problem is that it is quick, albeit some people like short stories (though, I think it's short even for a short story).