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6/1/2016 c1 CorenofLumbar
One issue with the story Crimson is a name no one from earth has. Unless the character is from remnant they don't have color related names.
5/8/2016 c2 2LebendenToten
Just thought I would leave a quick review for you. You have gotten a good start with your charecter (the one you have created so far) keep building up and expanding upon his back story as you go along, you want to make us (the readers) begin to feel invested in this charecter as time goes on. Also one thing to avoid going forward, and this is just a reminder, don't make your created charecter too powerful to the point where they could causes issues for the storyline development.
Best of luck to you,
Lebenden_Toten
Side note: I'm just about to beat x-com 2 myself :)

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