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8/5/2018 c24 tact
1 no the pace is right , it seem slow but it is very enjoyble

2 ofcource continue it amazing (marinate seem a little out of charater at start what with her not being shy enough but its good so continue please)

3 do not time skip just inclued the episode as it is i do want to read season 2 in story but no need to follow cannon as this is AU story just do what you like (but i think time may be bad for story the tension you have build in story may just vanish)
7/29/2018 c24 1WhyWouldIBeObsessed
1) Your speed is just fine
2) Please continue this
3) Maybe gradually introduce season 2 characters
7/26/2018 c24 21mayuralover
I think the pacing is fine and sometimes, I like reading dialogue a lot more than just pure description or exposition. It would be interesting to see more characters from season two, but I thihk the time skip needs to be relevant, too. Something has to happen within he span of time we don't get to see. Anyways, it is good to see you again!
7/26/2018 c24 2ChimaTigon
Have you heard of the pairing Luka x Kagami?
7/26/2018 c24 Lonelygirl702
1.) You could speed up the pace a little bit but don't rush it.
2.) Yes, I do still want to read this, it's very good
3.) I would love to see Luka and Kagami in this story.
7/26/2018 c24 11MiraculousBell3
This story is amazing! And although I just discovered it, I'm sure that loyal readers would wait for your chapters regardless of how long it takes you to update. It's just too good to stop now. But personal life choices would always stay first, and readers would accept whether you want to continue or not. I think that it would be great if you continued this story, but I'll support whatever you think is best. As for the Luka and Kagami thing, I personally love how this story has a 'season 1' feel to it if you know what I mean. I'm not sure what you would want to write in the future, but good luck!
7/26/2018 c24 3Purrincess Alix
The pacing is purrfect, yes u should continue it, and I think you shouldn't time skip so that way you can get more out of the story. Great story!
12/11/2017 c23 36WardofWinters
Oh this is cute, when's he going to give her the picture as chat noir? Then shell realize it's him.
9/10/2017 c23 Strawberry r Kitty
I am glad you have decided to continue the story! However, I highly recommend rereading what you have written, as there are many mistakes littered throughout the two recent chapters. Try reading what you have written out loud, and if the words just won't roll off the tongue properly, then they need to be fixed. Also, check your spacing and capitalization. But besides that, thank you for continuing this!
8/27/2017 c22 1PurifiedWildAkuma
OMG! ADRIEN! I WANT TO YELL AT YOU FOR BEING DUMB RIGHT NOW BUT THATS UNFAIR BECAUSE MARINETTE IS ALSO BEING DUMB AND- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH! This is still an AWSOME fanfic though,
7/14/2017 c22 Yuki Machida
Ahhhhhhhhh... it's been so long. I've missed this fanfic so much! I've been really busy for the past few months, so I wasn't able to read the fanfic, I'M SORRY! But now I'm free, so I'll be reading every update on time! I PINKY PROMISE! (๑•́ •̀๑) Love the chapter, don't stress and take it easy! Bye!
6/14/2017 c22 Guest
continue the storry
4/4/2017 c22 MLB fan
you said that 'today' is your start of sumer vacay BUT IT IS APRIL which means it has nearly been a year since you have uploaded. what gives?
4/1/2017 c22 6sweetXDmelody
This story is great! But they are soooo oblivious! :(
4/1/2017 c22 21mayuralover
Good luck with everything! Would love to see another chapter!
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