for Mistake1/9/2020 c1 BoredKing
For something so short, this is surprisingly deep and very well written. I quite liked it though I hate sad endings, them damn onion ninjas.
For something so short, this is surprisingly deep and very well written. I quite liked it though I hate sad endings, them damn onion ninjas.
5/12/2016 c1 Realfunnyjan
I'm sobbing it's so good!
I'm sobbing it's so good!
5/10/2016 c1 zombie toast
You my honest opinion? I'm crying that's what you did.
ahhhh my babies why did this have to happen to them?
(I liked it!)
You my honest opinion? I'm crying that's what you did.
ahhhh my babies why did this have to happen to them?
(I liked it!)
5/11/2016 c1 
11AshtonBlue
Good god this was heartbreaking!
It is sad when he realizes he can never really have anything in his life to make him happy.
11AshtonBlueGood god this was heartbreaking!
It is sad when he realizes he can never really have anything in his life to make him happy.
5/9/2016 c1 Guest
Oh god, this tore me apart. It's well written in my opinion, good job. :)
Oh god, this tore me apart. It's well written in my opinion, good job. :)
5/9/2016 c1 20roseimagine
Hi there, interesting, short piece.
I know Vlad's life was very tragic and as shown he never wanted it to be this way. It was very sentimental, I don't usually see fics that portray Vlad this ways but it's fresh and nice. A few grammatical errors here and there but nothing major. Great work and I'd love to read your future works, have a good one! :)
20roseimagineHi there, interesting, short piece.
I know Vlad's life was very tragic and as shown he never wanted it to be this way. It was very sentimental, I don't usually see fics that portray Vlad this ways but it's fresh and nice. A few grammatical errors here and there but nothing major. Great work and I'd love to read your future works, have a good one! :)
5/9/2016 c1 3ninjadaleburg
Oh my goodness, this is awesome!
And it is really your first try? Can not believe that. :)
3ninjadaleburgOh my goodness, this is awesome!
And it is really your first try? Can not believe that. :)