8/23/2018 c8 Neulach
I just love all the dream symbolism and plot lines you’re using in this story - it really shows how much effort and forward planning you are putting into it! I’m loving your characterisations and the little trickles of harrypotter content is just the perfect amount for me!

I did notice that chapter 8 seems a bit rushed, I really hope you’re not feeling pressured to produce chapters regularly. I’d happily take sparodic updates for the beautifully crafted chapters I know you can write (because you’ve already written some!)
Suddenly changing to calling Lyanna Harry gave me a bit of whiplash but I’ll get used to it (though I do prefer Lyanna - I associated the name Harry with male and the female pronounces are throwing me a bit!)

I think you mentioned in one of your earlier authors notes that English wasn’t your first language - You would not be able to tell from your writing!

8/22/2018 c8 1Shadow Wolf 15846
Nice!

8/22/2018 c8 1eyann85
I love that Lyanna and Harry’s personalities are starting to merge together, so far the story has been focused on Lyanna’s Asoiaf possible future. I’m glad the story will be diverting a bit from that hot mess. Thanks for the awesomeness

8/22/2018 c7 1AnImEfAN506
Wow! A pretty good read. Love the way you wrote this. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

7/7/2018 c7 belladu57
Very good_

5/28/2018 c7 LittleAngel2292
this was incredible! I hope that you continue!

5/8/2018 c6 belle hawk
Wish you would continue this story? It's so amazing and thrilling. Definitely a fresh air among all the HP/GOT crossovers