5/12/2016 c1 Koal
This has potential, plus treating the story as if it really happened adds realism, I cannot offer much judgement or advice untill I see more chapters and see what you're capable of as a writer.
This has potential, plus treating the story as if it really happened adds realism, I cannot offer much judgement or advice untill I see more chapters and see what you're capable of as a writer.