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5/19/2020 c23 46ThreeMagpies
Just beautiful, my friend, thank you for sharing a wonderful story! Cheers, Magpie
2/9/2019 c21 ThreeMagpies
Hi Love, SUCH a gorgeous and satisfying update, I loved it...sigh, if only there were more of Bass around, complete with all his complexities lol! You always write beautifully but there are some truly lovely passages in this - the bit on the porch, where he walks over to her... I can hear his boots on the wooden floor, and the love between them is just sweet...Great job my friend, such a lovely way to drift off to dreamland lol! thank you for sharing, xx Magpie
1/31/2019 c20 3Cherlaine
I really enjoyed reading this, waiting for the next chapter. I had a tear in my eye, such a beautiful and emotional story. I'd love to read more.
1/24/2019 c20 2decadenceofmysoul
Awesome update!
10/16/2018 c19 10banneg
That was truly beautiful! The detail and the emotion really brought me into the moment and allowed me to see Charlotte and feel her emotions.
6/10/2018 c17 eniledam05
This chapter gave me all the feels!
6/10/2018 c15 eniledam05
This chapter broke my heart. So good!
3/24/2018 c11 dixie326
One of the most underrated relationships in Revolution was the one between Charlie and Aaron. Part of why I hated the nano focus so much was that Aaron's focus went to that and you lost that onscreen bond that Aaron and Charlie had. Up until then, he had no other motives or focus other than wanting to have Charlie's back.
3/9/2018 c8 dixie326
Aside from my wanting Charlie and Bass together on the show, the other reason I didn't want her with Connor was for two reasons. The first was the anger and blame Connor rightly had for Miles about him taking Connor to Mexico and Connor winding up with a drug lord. The second reason was that the parts of Connor and Charlie are too similar for them to have a functioning relationship. They can understand each other (like you see in this chapter) and sympathize with each other but they can never really help each other to heal those broken pieces. It's why Charlie and Bass work. They are both broken but in different ways. It's hard to explain.
3/5/2018 c8 46ThreeMagpies
Hi Love, i really loved this! Charlie giving Connor some comfort, and the photo he thought he’d lost... just beautiful. Somehow she is giving Connor another chance for family and connection. The final paragraph of the chapter is simply amazing. I felt such a sense of compassion and hope reading it, It highlights Charlie’s indomitable strength and spirit - but is universal in its theme too, Love it :) looking forward to more xx Magpie
3/4/2018 c8 eniledam05
This chapter is so good! I love the friendship these two have!
2/18/2018 c7 2decadenceofmysoul
Awesome story so far!
2/6/2018 c5 46ThreeMagpies
Hi Love! Sorry I took so long to get to this, a great update! I really enjoy the way you have woven canon with new writing to provide a rich backdrop with depth and emotion that gives even more life to the characters we love. Well done my friend, looking forward to more :) xxx
1/28/2018 c4 ThreeMagpies
Hi Love, another great chapter :) I love how you so vividly show us what is happening for Bass, and why Charlie stayed...I love Charlie as a woman, a strong, independent and caring woman who knows what needs to be done and does it out of love...you write both of them very
well. Anyway, li really liked that : D
1/20/2018 c3 ThreeMagpies
Hi Love, SO excited that you are updating this story and this was just a fantastic chapter :D love the way you set the scene so perfectly in the Revo universe, adding your own colours. You invest every line with emotional depth and insight into character... I absolutely love that Charlie understands Bass, that they’ve come to understand each other, and out of that has come something else... we’ll done my friend! Looking forward to more :D xx
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