for Shopping Therapy5/13/2016 c1 
80TTY7
Hahahahaha! Getsu-chan! You have to continue this! It's hilarious! I just know that Gilgamesh is going to snap that woman's neck. And to think this spawned from you not being able to do laundry. Oh my soul sista, you are too much! You inspire me!
Anyway, onto the technical side of things. Grammar was great. The flow of the story was pretty awesome too and I didn't notice any errors...not that I was looking past the humor in this. I love how you write the dynamics between Gilgamesh and Kirei. They're just a lot of fun, much more fun than they probably should be, and I love it. Great work!
80TTY7Hahahahaha! Getsu-chan! You have to continue this! It's hilarious! I just know that Gilgamesh is going to snap that woman's neck. And to think this spawned from you not being able to do laundry. Oh my soul sista, you are too much! You inspire me!
Anyway, onto the technical side of things. Grammar was great. The flow of the story was pretty awesome too and I didn't notice any errors...not that I was looking past the humor in this. I love how you write the dynamics between Gilgamesh and Kirei. They're just a lot of fun, much more fun than they probably should be, and I love it. Great work!