for The Loudest Silence5/18/2016 c2 Tiphen
Okay you have my attention. I'm looking forward to reading more real soon. So keep up the good work.
Okay you have my attention. I'm looking forward to reading more real soon. So keep up the good work.
5/17/2016 c2 Guest
I really like this story. Its definitely becoming a favorite. It's well written, with an intruiging plot and story line. Can't wait for the next update!
~ Whovianeverlark17
I really like this story. Its definitely becoming a favorite. It's well written, with an intruiging plot and story line. Can't wait for the next update!
~ Whovianeverlark17
5/16/2016 c2 
1lullabydono
I Am so intrigued by this story. It's off to a great start! Don't give up on it!
1lullabydonoI Am so intrigued by this story. It's off to a great start! Don't give up on it!
5/16/2016 c2 12Durinsdottir
This is the kind of story that I wish I'd found late, when it was on chapter 20 or something just so I could binge read through it. Omg, I'm hooked already. It's a really refreshing take on the "girl falls into ME" plot. Really enjoying it and Jenna- what a clever way to introduce herself! Her driver's license, such logic.
I'm loving how you write the Dwarves; they seem pretty spot on. Lucky that she landed with the three most outwardly trusting of the company- the others might have been way more suspicious of her character. Though after seeing her tat, that might change... Interesting because the brothers shouldn't outright recognize the map, nor read the moon runes, but they sure as heck could pick out the Lonely Mt.
This is so good! And thanks for the shout out! Have no fear, your story is awesome already!
12DurinsdottirThis is the kind of story that I wish I'd found late, when it was on chapter 20 or something just so I could binge read through it. Omg, I'm hooked already. It's a really refreshing take on the "girl falls into ME" plot. Really enjoying it and Jenna- what a clever way to introduce herself! Her driver's license, such logic.
I'm loving how you write the Dwarves; they seem pretty spot on. Lucky that she landed with the three most outwardly trusting of the company- the others might have been way more suspicious of her character. Though after seeing her tat, that might change... Interesting because the brothers shouldn't outright recognize the map, nor read the moon runes, but they sure as heck could pick out the Lonely Mt.
This is so good! And thanks for the shout out! Have no fear, your story is awesome already!
5/16/2016 c2 obsessed reader
Another great chapter!
Another great chapter!
5/16/2016 c1 Kelly
I really liked your first chapter-keep it up!
I really liked your first chapter-keep it up!
5/15/2016 c1 Guest
Kudos to you. I'm definitely interested in reading more. Good job so far! :)
~ Whovianeverlark17
Kudos to you. I'm definitely interested in reading more. Good job so far! :)
~ Whovianeverlark17
5/15/2016 c1 obsessed reader
Loving this. Can't wait for more.
Loving this. Can't wait for more.
5/14/2016 c1 21Shiningheart of ThunderClan
Okay, I admit, I thought it was Fili and Kili at first because that's normally how a bunch of these stories start. You get points for originality, so yay for that! Also points for correct grammar and spelling, not revealing what the tattoo was, and not having her name revealed. I'll have to take away minor points though for the Mary Sue-ish "leave behind a sad pathetic life for one of excitement and adventure". So I'll give you... a 7/10, with room for improvement!
Though question. How is she unable to use ink to converse? Is it because she'd write in English and no one would be able to read it? Or would the ink like shift and move like an enchanted object until it looks like a bunch of squiggles?
21Shiningheart of ThunderClanOkay, I admit, I thought it was Fili and Kili at first because that's normally how a bunch of these stories start. You get points for originality, so yay for that! Also points for correct grammar and spelling, not revealing what the tattoo was, and not having her name revealed. I'll have to take away minor points though for the Mary Sue-ish "leave behind a sad pathetic life for one of excitement and adventure". So I'll give you... a 7/10, with room for improvement!
Though question. How is she unable to use ink to converse? Is it because she'd write in English and no one would be able to read it? Or would the ink like shift and move like an enchanted object until it looks like a bunch of squiggles?
5/14/2016 c1 12Durinsdottir
I like the OC already! She needs a hug right now. But did we get her name? Since its first person, I don't recall. Wait, how will anyone know her name? Do they have to nickname her? That's kind of cute lol
Like you totally had me going when she was approaching the fire, like "Oh, they'll be friendly faces and singing. It'll be lovely." Nope! Oh man, I'm glad she got away!
I wonder does her "curse" include screaming as well? Like, could she yell for help on the rock if she doesn't use words? I like how it's specified that it'll break once the goal is reached- how cute will that be when she can finally speak.
Wow, I really liked how you handled her "divine intervention". It'd be interesting if any of the Valar appear to her later on. Was that Yavanna, she met? Maybe it'll be revealed later on.
Really great start to the story. Your writing style just flows so well. Awesome first chapter! I need to know what happens next!
12DurinsdottirI like the OC already! She needs a hug right now. But did we get her name? Since its first person, I don't recall. Wait, how will anyone know her name? Do they have to nickname her? That's kind of cute lol
Like you totally had me going when she was approaching the fire, like "Oh, they'll be friendly faces and singing. It'll be lovely." Nope! Oh man, I'm glad she got away!
I wonder does her "curse" include screaming as well? Like, could she yell for help on the rock if she doesn't use words? I like how it's specified that it'll break once the goal is reached- how cute will that be when she can finally speak.
Wow, I really liked how you handled her "divine intervention". It'd be interesting if any of the Valar appear to her later on. Was that Yavanna, she met? Maybe it'll be revealed later on.
Really great start to the story. Your writing style just flows so well. Awesome first chapter! I need to know what happens next!