for Inevitable6/9/2016 c1 Devon
Kind of sucks that you made Draco love Astoria, when in most stories he's just with her because she has "good breeding".
Kind of sucks that you made Draco love Astoria, when in most stories he's just with her because she has "good breeding".
6/5/2016 c1 
5Katoptris9
Hmmmmm...I was laughing riots throughout and My mum is staring at me like I am going crazy...
Alright favorite bits:
1)Narcissa and baking as an intricate art, epic. I actually agree with Narcissa.
2)November 2004: The announcement of Charlie/Astoria. The whole scene.
3)Hyacinth Jamie, Of Course.
Keep writing. :)
5Katoptris9Hmmmmm...I was laughing riots throughout and My mum is staring at me like I am going crazy...
Alright favorite bits:
1)Narcissa and baking as an intricate art, epic. I actually agree with Narcissa.
2)November 2004: The announcement of Charlie/Astoria. The whole scene.
3)Hyacinth Jamie, Of Course.
Keep writing. :)
5/25/2016 c1 37c-cruxe
This is lovely! I think I had a smile on my face for most of it because both Harry and Draco are so sweet together in your story. Loved the writing style, and how you built the relationship in a way that would be feasible based on how you've established Harry and Draco's characters. A unique perspective on the pairing, too.
Can't wait to read more of your work!
37c-cruxeThis is lovely! I think I had a smile on my face for most of it because both Harry and Draco are so sweet together in your story. Loved the writing style, and how you built the relationship in a way that would be feasible based on how you've established Harry and Draco's characters. A unique perspective on the pairing, too.
Can't wait to read more of your work!
5/23/2016 c1 ur friend
I love how you wrote this! Draco's feelings & their relationship progressed so naturally and I really enjoyed how they slowly fell in love 3
I love how you wrote this! Draco's feelings & their relationship progressed so naturally and I really enjoyed how they slowly fell in love 3
5/22/2016 c1 Guest
You write amazing fem!harry stories. ️
You write amazing fem!harry stories. ️
5/19/2016 c1 R Sam
Very romantic. I wish she had pursued Draco much before she married Charlie. It's sad that she missed out on so much. The story was fast paced, and makes you want to read more.
I was wondering how HARRY could have chosen to marry someone like that, who would cheat on her. Your subplot that Harry and Charlie's marriage was a mere arrangement was very clever.
Very romantic. I wish she had pursued Draco much before she married Charlie. It's sad that she missed out on so much. The story was fast paced, and makes you want to read more.
I was wondering how HARRY could have chosen to marry someone like that, who would cheat on her. Your subplot that Harry and Charlie's marriage was a mere arrangement was very clever.
5/19/2016 c1 Milleniumdevil
I really enjoyed reading your story! I loved seeing the development of their relationship. It was very well written.
I really enjoyed reading your story! I loved seeing the development of their relationship. It was very well written.
5/18/2016 c1 saku hyuuga
I loved this story, it's an amazing perspective on this couple and very well written. Thank you!
I loved this story, it's an amazing perspective on this couple and very well written. Thank you!
5/18/2016 c1 harryislife
Awh this is really good. Really well written and different. I like how you haven't bashed anyone.
Awh this is really good. Really well written and different. I like how you haven't bashed anyone.
5/18/2016 c1 noneofmyshipssail
Yes Yes Yes. I'm first, I'm first, I'm finally first. This is a sign from the heavens. Good things are going to happen. We're all going to pass 4th sem.
1. I'm affronted that you'd ask why I read your story. You offered to read my work even though you aren't even in that fandom. Do you think I wouldn't read a story that you wrote just because it was I ship that I didn't particularly care about?
2. Thank you for paying attention to Charlie Weasly, even if it made him look like a giant douche. I've always felt that Harry Potter would've been even cooler if there Charlie was there with all his badass dragons and basically Dracarys-bitch-ed Voldemort. Or at least torched a couple of Death Eaters (My phone auto corrects Voldemort into Vole mortgage. Such is life)
3. Their backstories are soooooo sad. Waaaaaaah. :'(
4. I actually like this story better that ToT
5. Hyacinth Jaimee. I like it. I think I like all Jaimes.
6. I love how birth control is just potion.
7. For minds that have no discipline, such as mine, numbering helps to keep track of all of the 50000000 things that are running through it at any given moment.
Yes Yes Yes. I'm first, I'm first, I'm finally first. This is a sign from the heavens. Good things are going to happen. We're all going to pass 4th sem.
1. I'm affronted that you'd ask why I read your story. You offered to read my work even though you aren't even in that fandom. Do you think I wouldn't read a story that you wrote just because it was I ship that I didn't particularly care about?
2. Thank you for paying attention to Charlie Weasly, even if it made him look like a giant douche. I've always felt that Harry Potter would've been even cooler if there Charlie was there with all his badass dragons and basically Dracarys-bitch-ed Voldemort. Or at least torched a couple of Death Eaters (My phone auto corrects Voldemort into Vole mortgage. Such is life)
3. Their backstories are soooooo sad. Waaaaaaah. :'(
4. I actually like this story better that ToT
5. Hyacinth Jaimee. I like it. I think I like all Jaimes.
6. I love how birth control is just potion.
7. For minds that have no discipline, such as mine, numbering helps to keep track of all of the 50000000 things that are running through it at any given moment.