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212/28/2016 c10 HeRonLove
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
That was a great chapter. I can't wait to see Ron's reaction to Hermione tracking him down. I hope this action and reaction jumpstarts their communications and corporation with each other. I mean keeping secrets for each other worked for JKR. it was good to see that Harry and Neville at least noticed finally that she has not been interacting with them even if it was a fleeting inquiry. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
That was a great chapter. I can't wait to see Ron's reaction to Hermione tracking him down. I hope this action and reaction jumpstarts their communications and corporation with each other. I mean keeping secrets for each other worked for JKR. it was good to see that Harry and Neville at least noticed finally that she has not been interacting with them even if it was a fleeting inquiry. I can't wait for the next chapter.
12/28/2016 c1 Alicia Olivia Mirza
Hey!
Rather interesting - Ron as a Death Eater, Ron as Malfoy II... I'm quite interested how he became like that.
Alicia :3
Hey!
Rather interesting - Ron as a Death Eater, Ron as Malfoy II... I'm quite interested how he became like that.
Alicia :3
11/3/2016 c9 Guest
And the letter? First she don't wait for it to be totally restored for no reason, and now she forgot it?... mmm... the fic is losing coherence...
And the letter? First she don't wait for it to be totally restored for no reason, and now she forgot it?... mmm... the fic is losing coherence...
11/3/2016 c7 Guest
Good, but a bit incoherent. Last chapter Hermione though "Even so, it couldn't be that bad, could it?"... this after knowing they have to kill Dumbledore and Harry? Yes. It's that bad, and she knows it... And this chapter is the same... Hermione behaves as if nothing is wrong, and Ron is highly suspicious too... Hermione knows Ron must kill Harry and Dumbledore and she do nothing about it, and Ron knows Hermione saw him and knows he is a D.E. and do nothing aboit it too?...
Good, but a bit incoherent. Last chapter Hermione though "Even so, it couldn't be that bad, could it?"... this after knowing they have to kill Dumbledore and Harry? Yes. It's that bad, and she knows it... And this chapter is the same... Hermione behaves as if nothing is wrong, and Ron is highly suspicious too... Hermione knows Ron must kill Harry and Dumbledore and she do nothing about it, and Ron knows Hermione saw him and knows he is a D.E. and do nothing aboit it too?...
11/3/2016 c4 Guest
Not bad for now, but Ron is still a Draco clone. Not a redeeming trait... At some point he must take different path, not chosen by this (or canon) Draco.
Not bad for now, but Ron is still a Draco clone. Not a redeeming trait... At some point he must take different path, not chosen by this (or canon) Draco.
11/3/2016 c1 Guest
Not bad, but make sure to NOT make Ron another Draco clone... For this, we already have enough DH fics... Aeurrrgsss... sorry, only thinking about it, make me sick...
Not bad, but make sure to NOT make Ron another Draco clone... For this, we already have enough DH fics... Aeurrrgsss... sorry, only thinking about it, make me sick...
11/1/2016 c9 Guest
Hello, i love your story. Xx
Hello, i love your story. Xx
10/13/2016 c9 Anon
Great chapter as always
Great chapter as always
10/9/2016 c1 Guest
Nice
Nice
10/9/2016 c9 HeRonLove
That was a good chapter. I love Hermione's course of action in this chapter because her and Ron could use a really good relationship whether it be friendship or hopefully more. I hope she can get through to him, so he can get help with a way out of this mess he is in.
That was a good chapter. I love Hermione's course of action in this chapter because her and Ron could use a really good relationship whether it be friendship or hopefully more. I hope she can get through to him, so he can get help with a way out of this mess he is in.